This is fantastic and here is why: You did the J/D first time without having to go through endless dialogue about shouldwe/canwe/helpwhatisgoingon (which can be good, but not always) and you did it in a way that it makes sense - doesn't feel like you're leaving anything out to make it easier to write or anything, but feels like you just chose this particular moment to write about. I hope that makes sense!
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You did the J/D first time without having to go through endless dialogue about shouldwe/canwe/helpwhatisgoingon (which can be good, but not always) and you did it in a way that it makes sense - doesn't feel like you're leaving anything out to make it easier to write or anything, but feels like you just chose this particular moment to write about.
I hope that makes sense!