Aw, thank you so much! You're so very kind. I'm so glad the fic worked. It was bugging the hell out of me. One of those 'just stare at the screen' kind of fics. That's when I know it's time to move on.

You may have kick-started my own Stargate muse

Yay! More stargate fic! That's always A Good Thing. Glad I could help. *g*