Okay, this is getting boring. No, not you, just my feedback. Because all I can do whenever you post something new is to make "ah!" and "gah!" and "guh" noises, and the squeak "HOT!" all the time, and tell you how much I love it.
*ahs and gahs and guhs and says HOT!*
I love it, really loved it. I especially love the rain, because it gives the story a whole different feeling and makes it special. Rain, mission, tent, sex, yep, that's all I need to be happy.
And I lvoed this: and Daniel could make a simple act like writing in a notebook seem blatantly pornographic. becuase it is so so true. And Jack does stare at Daniel a lot, so I guess that's really what he is thinking. Thank you for writing and sharing this. Your head exploding wouldn't have been a good thing. ;-)
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No, not you, just my feedback. Because all I can do whenever you post something new is to make "ah!" and "gah!" and "guh" noises, and the squeak "HOT!" all the time, and tell you how much I love it.
*ahs and gahs and guhs and says HOT!*
I love it, really loved it. I especially love the rain, because it gives the story a whole different feeling and makes it special. Rain, mission, tent, sex, yep, that's all I need to be happy.
And I lvoed this:
and Daniel could make a simple act like writing in a notebook seem blatantly pornographic.
becuase it is so so true. And Jack does stare at Daniel a lot, so I guess that's really what he is thinking.
Thank you for writing and sharing this. Your head exploding wouldn't have been a good thing. ;-)