Now they were gone. It was incomprehensible that all of them--his grandfather, his father, even his own son--were dead and gone, had been gone for years, now.
This part made me feel so deeply for Jack right then. You could feel his lonliness just emanating from him and I just wanted to go in and hug him. (Well, who doesn't want to hug him? <g> )
I love cabin!Slash, especially when they're first times, and this fic just combined all of that together and made it fantastic.
::happy sigh::
You've got them nailed just perfectly (no, that is not a pun...) and I really love your Jack and Daniel and how they relate. I just turn into a puddle of goo.
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Now they were gone. It was incomprehensible that all of them--his grandfather, his father, even his own son--were dead and gone, had been gone for years, now.
This part made me feel so deeply for Jack right then. You could feel his lonliness just emanating from him and I just wanted to go in and hug him. (Well, who doesn't want to hug him? <g> )
I love cabin!Slash, especially when they're first times, and this fic just combined all of that together and made it fantastic.
::happy sigh::
You've got them nailed just perfectly (no, that is not a pun...) and I really love your Jack and Daniel and how they relate. I just turn into a puddle of goo.
Oi, I've turned into such a girl