(Whoops! I posted this on pennyplainknits' journal, but should've done this here too. So here it is!)
Oh my god. This was so wonderful!! I could listen to this story over and over.
@thegrrrl2002 - My goodness. This fic was so lovely and comfy! Danny's gloominess over Grace and then missing his family is palpable throughout the story. Then the domesticated vs grenades in the garage banter -- funny and tender at the same time! I love how you can see how Danny trusts Steve with his heavy heart and then Steve takes care of him all quiet-like. :)
@pennyplainknits - Wow you have an awesome storytelling voice. It's amazing how you capture everyone's personalities in their dialogue. Each voice is nuanced but still in tune with the timbre of the overall story. Your Danny is perfect! You even nailed his ranting with the sputtering that sounds both annoyed and adorable! Then Steve's all fond and content. *hearts*
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Date: 2011-05-03 11:06 pm (UTC)Oh my god. This was so wonderful!! I could listen to this story over and over.
@thegrrrl2002 - My goodness. This fic was so lovely and comfy! Danny's gloominess over Grace and then missing his family is palpable throughout the story. Then the domesticated vs grenades in the garage banter -- funny and tender at the same time! I love how you can see how Danny trusts Steve with his heavy heart and then Steve takes care of him all quiet-like. :)
@pennyplainknits - Wow you have an awesome storytelling voice. It's amazing how you capture everyone's personalities in their dialogue. Each voice is nuanced but still in tune with the timbre of the overall story. Your Danny is perfect! You even nailed his ranting with the sputtering that sounds both annoyed and adorable! Then Steve's all fond and content. *hearts*