Yeah, Massage 5 is well underway for serious re-write. I had to since I put bottom jack in part 6 in the preliminary notes, but Nooooo, he demanded it in part four so now I have to reconceptualize the last two parts. Though it's given me a chance to get Daniel back to pressing the flesh as it were. We sorta got into sex and away from massage and I rather liked the massage aspect.
I may have to make you a cheerleader icon....hmmmmm wanders off to think on the horror that is Daniel with pom poms...