Very Important Stuff

This was hot and lovely at the same time. The way in which the story circled back on itself to end where it began so intrinsically tied to the circle of life and the circle of history missing from the walls of the ruin really rang true to me. The fact that Jack and Daniel defied those odds, as Jack says, They had done it in the wrong order, yet somehow they had figured it
out, and that story would never get told. That's just perfect imho. *g*

Then there's this which I loved, This Mach
Two Daniel seemed to have muscles that Jack could have sworn weren't
there before, along with an energy and drive and a wholly new kind of
determination. This new Daniel came back into Jack's life with a
momentum that had carried him right into Jack's bed, and all Jack
could think was why the hell had they waited so long?

All in all, you might not have been quite happy with this story, but it did the trick for me. Thanks.