Thank you! The clunky parts are just screaming out to me, so it seems so obviously unpolished, you know? I'm so glad it reads okay.
And can you believe I actually wrote Jack on top? (so to speak). Usually I can't pry him out from underneath Daniel. Maybe that's why the fic felt so weird to me. *g*
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Date: 2004-11-27 11:15 am (UTC)And can you believe I actually wrote Jack on top? (so to speak). Usually I can't pry him out from underneath Daniel. Maybe that's why the fic felt so weird to me. *g*