Oooh, HOT. This was excellent, I enjoyed it very much. *fans self* They're so pretty! And I too love the curiousity thing - that's awesome.
One minor quibble though - I think John's rank changed halfway through. There's something a just a touch protective about Sheppard's actions, and Rodney likes that. He supposes Daniel brings that out in people, including, astonishingly enough, cold, hard colonels. I'm assuming this is referring to John rather than Jack, and as we go on to he, Rodney McKay, is balling Major John Pretty-Boy Sheppard. I think there's a mistake somewhere *g*
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Date: 2007-05-27 07:58 pm (UTC)One minor quibble though - I think John's rank changed halfway through. There's something a just a touch protective about Sheppard's actions, and Rodney likes that. He supposes Daniel brings that out in people, including, astonishingly enough, cold, hard colonels. I'm assuming this is referring to John rather than Jack, and as we go on to he, Rodney McKay, is balling Major John Pretty-Boy Sheppard. I think there's a mistake somewhere *g*