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thegrrrl2002 ([personal profile] thegrrrl2002) wrote2005-06-09 10:00 am
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A little bitty Jack/Daniel thingy

Just a little moment between them, that I was unable to make into a fic. At least not yet.



Daniel licked. Then licked again.

With a wordless protest, Jack shifted his hips.

Daniel stroked Jack's thigh, leaned in, and took Jack's soft, quiescent cock into his mouth.

"Daniel," Jack complained.

"Mmm?" Daniel nudged Jack's balls with his nose. Jack smelled of sweat and contentment.

"You've got to be kidding."

Daniel let Jack's cock slide out of his mouth, pushing his tongue against it, tasting the spent passion. "What?" he asked, glancing up.

Jack gazed down at him, eyes slitted. "Dozing, okay?"

Daniel slid a hand up over Jack's hip, over the lingering red marks where his fingers had dug in. "Not any more." He ran his tongue over Jack's cock once again.

Jack grunted. "Daniel, I'm no spring chicken. I'm going to need a little more time."

"I don't know." Daniel reached up and patted his stomach. "You feel kind of plump and tender to me."

Jack blinked at him, then scowled. "I'm just going to pretend I didn't hear that, okay?"

Daniel nodded. "They say the hearing is the first to go." He pressed a kiss to the tip of Jack's cock. "Well, maybe not the very first thing."

"Okay, just hold on." Jack sat up and tugged on Daniel's shoulder. "Are you telling me--?"

Daniel rolled over and grinned.

"Oh. Never mind." Jack sighed. "But, hey, I was like that at your age, too."

"Back when dinosaurs roamed the earth?" Daniel pushed Jack down on the bed and slid over him, his hard cock pressing against Jack's leg.

"Something like that." Jack titled his head back, allowing Daniel to nibble at his throat. "You know, if I wanted this kind of abuse I could have just stayed in DC." His hands slid down Daniel's back and cupped his ass.

"You mean this is what you've been doing at the Pentagon?" Daniel raised his head. "Wow, things must have really changed--hey!" He laughed as Jack rolled him over and pinned his wrists to the bed. His laughter was muffled by Jack's kiss--a sweet, slow kiss that spoke of late-night phone calls and quiet longing. Daniel's hands slipped from Jack's grasp and wrapped around Jack's body, holding on.

"It takes a bit of getting used to, doesn't it?" Daniel said, when he could talk again.

"Daniel, it sucks."

Daniel pulled Jack to lie down on his body, Jack's head resting on his chest, gray hairs tickling his chin. "Yeah, that too. But like you said, it won't be for forever." Even though each week felt like forever, and the weekends seemed to disappear in the blink of an eye.

[identity profile] nangi-akki.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
'sokay - just the snippet is quite smoked salmon worthy :)

[identity profile] cynnamon37.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this...so warm and sexy...horny Daniel and sated Jack. Yum. I think what I love so much about your writing is the feeling of intimacy you manage to portray, and the fact that you let the characters *be* so intimate with each other. It just feels so natural and real. Yep, that's it.
p.s. I've just started watching Stargate (love Monday nights!) and reading J/D fics...loved all of yours, naturally. Would you have any personal favorites that you might recommend? Coming late to the party like this, there's just so MUCH to filter through, so I'm going by authors that I already know and like from Stargate Atlantis fics. And downloading old episodes. Yes, and falling in love. MmmmDaniel. And Jack. :)

[identity profile] skater-g8r.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
awwman!! that was so beauiful,I could cry, love your J/D so much! thank you for sharing this, please share more! please?

[identity profile] skater-g8r.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa! grassy layout!!! kewl *-))
I still have my jacks ass!! cant let go MWaAAa!!
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[identity profile] shendara.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmmm... wonderful scene. Your J/D is just perfect and in character. And I still can't believe that there will be no more Jack in Stargate... He really summed it up with "Daniel, it sucks".

PS: Do you mind if I friend you?

[identity profile] duffy-99.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Then I think you need to let those little moments out! Let them run wild, fly free, let them...oh, you get the picture. I would enjoy reading many more little "non-stories" just like this from you.

[identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh. This is great. A lovely look in at them.

[identity profile] jenlev.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
bwahaha! ""Dozing, okay?" " that's *so* jack.

how poignant to see them counting on the time they are together, and recognizing how quickly it can dissipate. and the quality of gentleness in their conversation is very fine.

[identity profile] stephicozar.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Kissing. *sigh* I love them so MUCH!
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[identity profile] emyrys.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Sweeeet. sigh.

Can't wait for the full story. /*cue innocent smile */

[identity profile] eregyrn.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
Smoked salmon? Really? I love that stuff. *g*

*files this away for future reference*

[identity profile] eregyrn.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
... or something. :D

Ahhh, you know I love this so much. Even when it's kind of poignant. It's kind of funny... I wonder if a S9-era fic is possible *without* it being poignant? Like, that's a reflection of all the anxiety that the fans are having towards S9 (from the perspect of what's happening with Jack, anyway, if nothing else). I think we'll need to get actual S9 and see what they actually tell us is up with Jack and how they play it, before we can even get the possibility of any other kind of take on S9 J/D.

But sweet and warm and poignant works really well, too. ;-)

[identity profile] maraceles.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this so much! It's so poignant, and yet so warm at the same time--this is exactly what will happen (in my slash-goggle land)!!! Poor DC-trapped Jack! But at least he's still married to Daniel! *g*

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
It's hard to write something S9-ish without a touch of sadness, I think. No more Jack! ::sniffles:: Even S8 was hard, because he wasn't part of the team anymore, and as General, you could see that he was struggling. It all has a real 'end of an era' feeling to it.

It will be interesting to see how they deal with Jack's leaving. And how we (I?) will be able to turn it into a 'and they lived happily ever after' kind of thing. *g*

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
That's really sweet of you, thank you! I hesitate to post little things like this, wondering if it's pointless and I really should try and write a "real" fic. But then I decide I have to get it out of my head or else it would make me crazy.

Er, crazier.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course they're so in love. It's canon, isn't it? ::frowns:: Yup, canon.

And you're very welcome. Sometimes, the hero really does get to be happy, honest.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was just a tiny little thing, but I just love picturing them together like that.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I miss them too.

Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
You mean they really aren't like this?

::ponders::

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Daniel's pretty fresh. And Jack loves him that way. *g*

I'm glad you liked this, I just needed to have them snuggling together for a bit. They really need a 'happily ever after' in my mind.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! That's really kind of you. I'm glad you liked.

They're easy to write this way, I have admit.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweetie! You're so kind. Thank you.

I feel like I don't have anything else in my head for them at the moment. Which makes me sad. But, you know, that can always change.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
It does suck, doesn't it? It's just not even close to being the same show without Jack.

And please, feel free to friend away! No need to ask. I'm sure you've noticed my journal is filled with Atlantis fics and squeeing, though. Just a warning. *g*

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, that's such a lovely compliment! I'm very flattered.

You know, I got into Stargate when it came to the Scifi channel a couple years back, and I just loved those Monday nights airings. I was sad when I got all caught up on the seasons I missed. *g*

There are a zillion wonderful authors out there. I think the easiest is to rec you good rec pages! There's Destina's:
http://www.lyricalmagic.com/miscrecs2.html
And Danvers:
http://d4nvers.users.btopenworld.com/recs/stargate.html
(And I highly recommend those author's fics, too)
I have my own little tiny rec page, that I've never updated, but all those authors are quite good:
http://www.geocities.com/thegrrrl2002/grrrlrecs.html

Hope that helps!

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-10 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
::covers you with blankets::

Naptime is always good.

*g*

And thank you!

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