A little bitty Jack/Daniel thingy

[thegrrrl2002]

Just a little moment between them, that I was unable to make into a fic. At least not yet.



Daniel licked. Then licked again.

With a wordless protest, Jack shifted his hips.

Daniel stroked Jack's thigh, leaned in, and took Jack's soft, quiescent cock into his mouth.

"Daniel," Jack complained.

"Mmm?" Daniel nudged Jack's balls with his nose. Jack smelled of sweat and contentment.

"You've got to be kidding."

Daniel let Jack's cock slide out of his mouth, pushing his tongue against it, tasting the spent passion. "What?" he asked, glancing up.

Jack gazed down at him, eyes slitted. "Dozing, okay?"

Daniel slid a hand up over Jack's hip, over the lingering red marks where his fingers had dug in. "Not any more." He ran his tongue over Jack's cock once again.

Jack grunted. "Daniel, I'm no spring chicken. I'm going to need a little more time."

"I don't know." Daniel reached up and patted his stomach. "You feel kind of plump and tender to me."

Jack blinked at him, then scowled. "I'm just going to pretend I didn't hear that, okay?"

Daniel nodded. "They say the hearing is the first to go." He pressed a kiss to the tip of Jack's cock. "Well, maybe not the very first thing."

"Okay, just hold on." Jack sat up and tugged on Daniel's shoulder. "Are you telling me--?"

Daniel rolled over and grinned.

"Oh. Never mind." Jack sighed. "But, hey, I was like that at your age, too."

"Back when dinosaurs roamed the earth?" Daniel pushed Jack down on the bed and slid over him, his hard cock pressing against Jack's leg.

"Something like that." Jack titled his head back, allowing Daniel to nibble at his throat. "You know, if I wanted this kind of abuse I could have just stayed in DC." His hands slid down Daniel's back and cupped his ass.

"You mean this is what you've been doing at the Pentagon?" Daniel raised his head. "Wow, things must have really changed--hey!" He laughed as Jack rolled him over and pinned his wrists to the bed. His laughter was muffled by Jack's kiss--a sweet, slow kiss that spoke of late-night phone calls and quiet longing. Daniel's hands slipped from Jack's grasp and wrapped around Jack's body, holding on.

"It takes a bit of getting used to, doesn't it?" Daniel said, when he could talk again.

"Daniel, it sucks."

Daniel pulled Jack to lie down on his body, Jack's head resting on his chest, gray hairs tickling his chin. "Yeah, that too. But like you said, it won't be for forever." Even though each week felt like forever, and the weekends seemed to disappear in the blink of an eye.

Comments

[gurrier.livejournal.com]

J/D! With teasing and wistfulness and kissing. This is lovely - thank you!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! They make me feel kind of wistful, too. I think I need to go back and watch some old eps.

[castalie.livejournal.com]

*happy sigh* That was so very lovely and sweet and sensual and just so Jack and Daniel. Loved it! Thanks *g*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was just a little thing but I really just like to think of them being like that.

[queenofstars.livejournal.com]

*sighs*
As I've said before somewhere else, it doesn't have to be hot to be good. Warm is good. Better than good actually.
Pieces like this are the only thing that will make next season tolerable. Lovely.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Oh, gorgeous icon!

I'm a little leery of next season, too. It probably will be fun, but it's not going to be the same show, that's for sure.

[katie-m.livejournal.com]

Aww. Poor far-away Jack, with a fifty-something dick.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

LOL, exactly! Just makes me want to pet him. Or something like that.

[karendreamer.livejournal.com]

Sigh....definitely need more like this. A lovely reminder of how much they love each other and belong together. We must always remember this.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

They definitely belong together. Next season? That's going to be some other Stargate-ish show.

[destina.livejournal.com]

Awww. Don't stay in DC, Jack! Come back and be sweaty and contented. :) I just love them like this. And this was a perfect way to start my day this morning. Thank you. *hugs you!*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, you're so sweet. I'm glad you liked. I feel like I'm full of little moments like this for them, no real stories, just a lot of touching and being together. And sweaty. *g*

[wesleysgirl.livejournal.com]

Oh. Beautiful.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[nangi-akki.livejournal.com]

i love you muchly and will bribe/beg/grovel etc for more.
chocolate? smoked salmon? beef jerky? blue jello?

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Smoked salmon? Really? I love that stuff. *g*

Not sure I have any more of this in my head though. Unfortunately.

[raqs.livejournal.com]

sigh. i love your world. the people in it are always in love, always have time to touch each other, always have such a relaxed, loving attitude towards sex. it's a rose-colored world where there's plenty of time for foreplay even when it doesn't lead to orgasms.

plus, did i mention they're always so in love?

sigh. thank you for this summery love bit.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Of course they're so in love. It's canon, isn't it? ::frowns:: Yup, canon.

And you're very welcome. Sometimes, the hero really does get to be happy, honest.

[cheights.livejournal.com]

"You mean this is what you've been doing at the Pentagon?

LOL!

What a lovely moment, warm and touching, and bittersweet.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was just a tiny little thing, but I just love picturing them together like that.

[sori1773.livejournal.com]

I so miss Jack and Daniel! *happy sigh* This was lovely. *bg*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

I miss them too.

Glad you liked it!

[teand.livejournal.com]

This is how it should be. Thank you.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

You mean they really aren't like this?

::ponders::

[spikedluv]

Awww! And awwwww. (Did you notice the difference in intonation there?! *g*) That was so sweet, and a tiny bit sad. Poor boys, together, but not nearly enough. *sigh* Loved Daniel's teasing, "They say the hearing is the first to go." He pressed a kiss to the tip of Jack's cock. "Well, maybe not the very first thing." Hee!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Daniel's pretty fresh. And Jack loves him that way. *g*

I'm glad you liked this, I just needed to have them snuggling together for a bit. They really need a 'happily ever after' in my mind.

[malnpudl.livejournal.com]

That's lovely; warm and happy and sensual and... belonging.

I just love the way you write them.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That's really kind of you. I'm glad you liked.

They're easy to write this way, I have admit.

[catspaw-sgjd.livejournal.com]

::happy sigh::

That is all.

Beautiful, tender, just gorgeous :-)

Okay, maybe not quite all ;-)

There *will* be more, won't there? You will get back to writing lots more J/D soon? ::looks hopeful::

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Sweetie! You're so kind. Thank you.

I feel like I don't have anything else in my head for them at the moment. Which makes me sad. But, you know, that can always change.

[agentotter.livejournal.com]

That was so pretty, and warm, and snuggly. I want to curl up with it and take a nap.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

::covers you with blankets::

Naptime is always good.

*g*

And thank you!

[artifuss.livejournal.com]

*swoons* That was such a perfect moment! *happy sighs*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked.

[cynnamon37.livejournal.com]

I loved this...so warm and sexy...horny Daniel and sated Jack. Yum. I think what I love so much about your writing is the feeling of intimacy you manage to portray, and the fact that you let the characters *be* so intimate with each other. It just feels so natural and real. Yep, that's it.
p.s. I've just started watching Stargate (love Monday nights!) and reading J/D fics...loved all of yours, naturally. Would you have any personal favorites that you might recommend? Coming late to the party like this, there's just so MUCH to filter through, so I'm going by authors that I already know and like from Stargate Atlantis fics. And downloading old episodes. Yes, and falling in love. MmmmDaniel. And Jack. :)

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, that's such a lovely compliment! I'm very flattered.

You know, I got into Stargate when it came to the Scifi channel a couple years back, and I just loved those Monday nights airings. I was sad when I got all caught up on the seasons I missed. *g*

There are a zillion wonderful authors out there. I think the easiest is to rec you good rec pages! There's Destina's:
http://www.lyricalmagic.com/miscrecs2.html
And Danvers:
http://d4nvers.users.btopenworld.com/recs/stargate.html
(And I highly recommend those author's fics, too)
I have my own little tiny rec page, that I've never updated, but all those authors are quite good:
http://www.geocities.com/thegrrrl2002/grrrlrecs.html

Hope that helps!

[skater-g8r.livejournal.com]

awwman!! that was so beauiful,I could cry, love your J/D so much! thank you for sharing this, please share more! please?

[skater-g8r.livejournal.com]

Whoa! grassy layout!!! kewl *-))
I still have my jacks ass!! cant let go MWaAAa!!

[shendara.livejournal.com]

Hmmm... wonderful scene. Your J/D is just perfect and in character. And I still can't believe that there will be no more Jack in Stargate... He really summed it up with "Daniel, it sucks".

PS: Do you mind if I friend you?

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

It does suck, doesn't it? It's just not even close to being the same show without Jack.

And please, feel free to friend away! No need to ask. I'm sure you've noticed my journal is filled with Atlantis fics and squeeing, though. Just a warning. *g*

[sffan.livejournal.com]

Oooh. This is great. A lovely look in at them.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

"Hardass" indeed. *g*

[jenlev.livejournal.com]

bwahaha! ""Dozing, okay?" " that's *so* jack.

how poignant to see them counting on the time they are together, and recognizing how quickly it can dissipate. and the quality of gentleness in their conversation is very fine.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

I think Jack finds dozing very important. Especially post-coital dozing. *g*

And thank you, your feedback is always so squee-inducing. ::squees gently::

[stephicozar.livejournal.com]

Kissing. *sigh* I love them so MUCH!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Me too, me too. They really just need to live happily ever after, don't they? No more angst. They've had enough.

[emyrys.livejournal.com]

Sweeeet. sigh.

Can't wait for the full story. /*cue innocent smile */

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Eeep!

I wish I had a story to go with this! ::sobs::

But look, they're so pretty in bed together! ::runs away::

[maraceles.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love this so much! It's so poignant, and yet so warm at the same time--this is exactly what will happen (in my slash-goggle land)!!! Poor DC-trapped Jack! But at least he's still married to Daniel! *g*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you, that's so kind of you! Glad you liked it.

They are very married. And nothing will change that. *g*