thegrrrl2002: (Jack and Daniel--birthright)
thegrrrl2002 ([personal profile] thegrrrl2002) wrote2005-06-09 10:00 am
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A little bitty Jack/Daniel thingy

Just a little moment between them, that I was unable to make into a fic. At least not yet.



Daniel licked. Then licked again.

With a wordless protest, Jack shifted his hips.

Daniel stroked Jack's thigh, leaned in, and took Jack's soft, quiescent cock into his mouth.

"Daniel," Jack complained.

"Mmm?" Daniel nudged Jack's balls with his nose. Jack smelled of sweat and contentment.

"You've got to be kidding."

Daniel let Jack's cock slide out of his mouth, pushing his tongue against it, tasting the spent passion. "What?" he asked, glancing up.

Jack gazed down at him, eyes slitted. "Dozing, okay?"

Daniel slid a hand up over Jack's hip, over the lingering red marks where his fingers had dug in. "Not any more." He ran his tongue over Jack's cock once again.

Jack grunted. "Daniel, I'm no spring chicken. I'm going to need a little more time."

"I don't know." Daniel reached up and patted his stomach. "You feel kind of plump and tender to me."

Jack blinked at him, then scowled. "I'm just going to pretend I didn't hear that, okay?"

Daniel nodded. "They say the hearing is the first to go." He pressed a kiss to the tip of Jack's cock. "Well, maybe not the very first thing."

"Okay, just hold on." Jack sat up and tugged on Daniel's shoulder. "Are you telling me--?"

Daniel rolled over and grinned.

"Oh. Never mind." Jack sighed. "But, hey, I was like that at your age, too."

"Back when dinosaurs roamed the earth?" Daniel pushed Jack down on the bed and slid over him, his hard cock pressing against Jack's leg.

"Something like that." Jack titled his head back, allowing Daniel to nibble at his throat. "You know, if I wanted this kind of abuse I could have just stayed in DC." His hands slid down Daniel's back and cupped his ass.

"You mean this is what you've been doing at the Pentagon?" Daniel raised his head. "Wow, things must have really changed--hey!" He laughed as Jack rolled him over and pinned his wrists to the bed. His laughter was muffled by Jack's kiss--a sweet, slow kiss that spoke of late-night phone calls and quiet longing. Daniel's hands slipped from Jack's grasp and wrapped around Jack's body, holding on.

"It takes a bit of getting used to, doesn't it?" Daniel said, when he could talk again.

"Daniel, it sucks."

Daniel pulled Jack to lie down on his body, Jack's head resting on his chest, gray hairs tickling his chin. "Yeah, that too. But like you said, it won't be for forever." Even though each week felt like forever, and the weekends seemed to disappear in the blink of an eye.

[identity profile] gurrier.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
J/D! With teasing and wistfulness and kissing. This is lovely - thank you!

[identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy sigh* That was so very lovely and sweet and sensual and just so Jack and Daniel. Loved it! Thanks *g*
ext_214: dh: don't let the stars get in your eyes (jack: so tired)

[identity profile] queenofstars.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
*sighs*
As I've said before somewhere else, it doesn't have to be hot to be good. Warm is good. Better than good actually.
Pieces like this are the only thing that will make next season tolerable. Lovely.

[identity profile] katie-m.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww. Poor far-away Jack, with a fifty-something dick.

[identity profile] karendreamer.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Sigh....definitely need more like this. A lovely reminder of how much they love each other and belong together. We must always remember this.

[identity profile] destina.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. Don't stay in DC, Jack! Come back and be sweaty and contented. :) I just love them like this. And this was a perfect way to start my day this morning. Thank you. *hugs you!*

[identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. Beautiful.

[identity profile] nangi-akki.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
i love you muchly and will bribe/beg/grovel etc for more.
chocolate? smoked salmon? beef jerky? blue jello?

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! They make me feel kind of wistful, too. I think I need to go back and watch some old eps.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was just a little thing but I really just like to think of them being like that.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, gorgeous icon!

I'm a little leery of next season, too. It probably will be fun, but it's not going to be the same show, that's for sure.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, exactly! Just makes me want to pet him. Or something like that.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
They definitely belong together. Next season? That's going to be some other Stargate-ish show.

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, you're so sweet. I'm glad you liked. I feel like I'm full of little moments like this for them, no real stories, just a lot of touching and being together. And sweaty. *g*

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Smoked salmon? Really? I love that stuff. *g*

Not sure I have any more of this in my head though. Unfortunately.
ext_1758: (Hero)

[identity profile] raqs.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
sigh. i love your world. the people in it are always in love, always have time to touch each other, always have such a relaxed, loving attitude towards sex. it's a rose-colored world where there's plenty of time for foreplay even when it doesn't lead to orgasms.

plus, did i mention they're always so in love?

sigh. thank you for this summery love bit.
ext_16366: (Daniel Love by icon_ascension)

[identity profile] cheights.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
"You mean this is what you've been doing at the Pentagon?

LOL!

What a lovely moment, warm and touching, and bittersweet.

[identity profile] sori1773.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I so miss Jack and Daniel! *happy sigh* This was lovely. *bg*

[identity profile] teand.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This is how it should be. Thank you.
spikedluv: (jack_danielsays_chelle)

[personal profile] spikedluv 2005-06-09 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! And awwwww. (Did you notice the difference in intonation there?! *g*) That was so sweet, and a tiny bit sad. Poor boys, together, but not nearly enough. *sigh* Loved Daniel's teasing, "They say the hearing is the first to go." He pressed a kiss to the tip of Jack's cock. "Well, maybe not the very first thing." Hee!

[identity profile] malnpudl.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That's lovely; warm and happy and sensual and... belonging.

I just love the way you write them.

[identity profile] catspaw-sgjd.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
::happy sigh::

That is all.

Beautiful, tender, just gorgeous :-)

Okay, maybe not quite all ;-)

There *will* be more, won't there? You will get back to writing lots more J/D soon? ::looks hopeful::

[identity profile] agentotter.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so pretty, and warm, and snuggly. I want to curl up with it and take a nap.

[identity profile] artifuss.livejournal.com 2005-06-09 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*swoons* That was such a perfect moment! *happy sighs*

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