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A hand square on John's chest, and Rodney shoves him away. "You were so flirting with her," Rodney accuses.

John stumbles backward, grinning. "Yes, I was." He approaches Rodney again, pulling him into an embrace. Rodney is stiff and unyielding in his arms, all indignation and vivid blue eyes. "And so were you," John adds.

Rodney breaks free again, but he doesn't leave. "No, no I was not. She was flirting with me. There's a difference. A big difference."

"And you flirted right back. Although, really, you suck at it, Rodney." John approaches and tries again, hand firm on the back of Rodney's neck.

This time Rodney acquiesces. His mouth is rough and maybe a little wild, and he pulls John close, hands bunching up his t-shirt. "You're just jealous because she likes me better," Rodney insists.

"She does not." John drags Rodney down onto the bed and Rodney's hand goes to John's cock, squeezing through layers of fabric and making John gasp.

"Jeeze, we nearly died. All of us. In a middle of a huge erupting volcano." Rodney voice is awestruck and he kisses John, hard. Then pulls back. "For god's sake, will you please take your shoes off?"

"Okay, okay." John sits up and hurries to untie his shoelaces. It's not easy since Rodney is still squeezing his cock, and his breath is tickling John's neck. Sensory overload, resulting in clumsy fingers and knotted laces. "I was just trying to save you from her," John says over his shoulder.

"Why thank you. Is that what you are doing right now?" Rodney bites his neck, sending a jolt of pleasure through John's body. "God, you stink. Sulfur."

"Because I was busy rescuing people." John finally gets it under control, kicking his shoes off. He twists around in Rodney's arms. "While you were coming up with that clever plan to save us all."

Rodney gives a happy little hum. "It was clever, wasn't it?"

Rodney looks so smug that John has to push him down, flat on his back, and unfasten his pants. Now that Rodney can't reach his cock, his fingers are working much better. "You're a genius, Rodney, just like Noreena said."

Noreena had spent the entire time gazing at Rodney as if he were the most wonderful and amazing thing in the entire universe. It was nauseating to watch.

At the mention of Noreena's name, Rodney's eyes narrow. "You were all over her," he reminds John. "I don't know what kind of point you were trying make, but it was quite disturbing."

"I was just having some fun," John tells him with an easy grin. He tucks his fingers beneath the waistband of Rodney's briefs and pulls. Rodney obligingly lifts his hips. John pulls down, taking Rodney's pants off along with the briefs. "Oh, what, are you still planning to have a nice dinner with her?" He throws the pants onto the floor.

"Maybe I should," Rodney says, glaring at John. "She was very pretty."

John kneels between Rodney's legs and strokes his thighs. "You're prettier."

Rodney's mouth goes crooked and outraged. "Right." Clad only in his black t-shirt, arms crossed over his chest, he's naked from the waist down, hard, flushed cock contrasting with the pale skin of his hips.

He's the most beautiful thing John has ever seen, and maybe the most indignant, too. "Is that what you want?" John asks. He unfastens his own pants, and pushes them down past his hips, freeing his heavy cock. "A nice quiet dinner, a pretty blonde 'scientist' gazing at you adoringly?"

Rodney cocks his head, looking thoughtful. "I do like the idea of the adoration, it's really what I deserve, what with the whole 'saving your ass' and gaining us a fancy new spaceship thing."

Maybe Rodney does deserve at least that, because there were moments on that planet where John thought they were done for. But Rodney's not going to get any more adoration from Noreena, not if John can help it. Stretching out over Rodney, he settles in and Rodney unfolds his arms and wraps them around John, holding him tight. Hip to hip, chest to chest, nose to nose and fuck, Rodney is hot, skin like a furnace and John wants to hold him down on the bed forever, just like this, Rodney beneath him, pushing up against him, Rodney's face pressed against his.

"You still smell," Rodney whispers in John's ear. He reaches down to adjust his cock so it's lined up next to John's.

"You want me to go shower?" John asks. "Right now?" He makes as if to push himself away, but Rodney's arms clamp down around his waist and yeah, it's good. His cock presses into warm, smooth skin and Rodney spreads his legs, bringing his knees up and digging his feet in to push up. Then it's steady rocking, a sweet, slow frottage that John can't help speeding up because it's so damn good, sex with Rodney is always this good.

Everything fades: Noreena with the smile and the hair and curves, the planet and the volcano and its people, the Orion and the coming Hive ship. No more dilemmas without solutions--only Rodney, the feel of Rodney's skin and cock and his broad hand gripping John's ass, Rodney's mouth and his tongue and hot breath on John's cheek.

"Rodney," John says with a bare whimper, and then he comes. It's an amazing rush, bone-shakingly good. As the wetness spreads between them Rodney moans out loud. He keeps on moaning, louder and louder as he moves, rubbing his cock against John's wet skin.

John presses his cheek against Rodney's and listens, eyes closed.

Then Rodney arches his back, clutching John's ass. "Oh, god", he pants, then comes with a satisfying yelp.

John smiles.

Rodney relaxes beneath him, hands falling away. John kisses him, then rolls off to one side, draping himself over Rodney's body, one hand sliding up under Rodney's shirt. He waits, but Rodney doesn't get up. He just runs his hand over John's head, playing with his hair. John finally rests his head on Rodney's shoulder. "So," he says. "Don't you need to go?"

"Oh, didn't I tell you? Radek is going to give Noreena the tour of the city," Rodney says.

"No, you did not." John tweaks a nipple, hard.

With a self-satisfied laugh, Rodney rolls over, facing him. He looks as pleased as can be, but before John can complain, Rodney's mouth covers his and there's nothing at all to complain about.

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Date: 2006-01-25 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rivier.livejournal.com
Yum yum YUM.

I so had that feeling in my head - of Rodney being just snippy and stubborn enough to hold out for, oh, 4.1 seconds or so. And getting courted and seduced anyway, because who wouldn't?

Such a happy ep, and this led right on from it. I'm reduced to making terrible post-orgasmic mmmm, so good! noises, sorry!

Date: 2006-01-25 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inthekeyofd.livejournal.com
See, that is is exactly what I was looking for in a post-Inferno fic...the teasing about the flirting, the playing, everything that they are saying to each other all the while getting undressed and getting to business. *smile*

Have I told you lately YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!

Date: 2006-01-25 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwendolen.livejournal.com
*sigh* sweet and funny and just lovely. I like the boys like that :-)

Made me smile :-)

Date: 2006-01-25 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
You never, EVER write pointless SGA porn! I love the touch of Jealous John and Rodney saying he deserves a little adoration because that's so true. Just picture perfect, as always.

Porn!

Date: 2006-01-25 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I like when you make those noises.

Rodney loves being difficult, and John loves it when Rodney's difficult, and it all just feeds upon itself, doesn't it?

It all leads to happy wrestling.

Date: 2006-01-25 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
LOL! Thank you. I was just finishing this up when I saw your reponse to my comment. *g*

There's much unfinished business with this ep, isn't there?

Date: 2006-01-25 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, your comment made me smile! Thank you.

I like to think of them like that, too. *g*

Date: 2006-01-25 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
LOL, thank you. And John was definitely jealous. He's so cute that way.

Date: 2006-01-25 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com
"Jeeze, we nearly died. All of us. In a middle of a huge erupting volcano." Rodney voice is awestruck and he kisses John, hard. Then pulls back. "For god's sake, will you please take your shoes off?"

OMG! Hhahaha! I love these lines. I love the way I can imagine the shift in his tone, the peevishness at the end here. Yay! This was very fun, thank you :)

Date: 2006-01-25 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh god, thank you! I'm so glad that shift worked. I could hear it in my head, but I wasn't sure I got it across properly. It's such a Rodney kind of thing, isn't it?

Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2006-01-25 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niennah.livejournal.com
Just lovely! Exactly right for after that episode. Teasing and funny and hot. *g*

Date: 2006-01-25 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reginabellatrix.livejournal.com
This distracted me from my Con Law II reading. Thank you. Perfect porny tag for the ep, 'cause we all know that John was totally jealous.

I like your new LJ look. Perfect background for porn. ;)

Date: 2006-01-25 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I really had no intention of writing this, until, I, er, started writing it. Damn ep killed my brain, I swear.

I think I need to watch it again.

Date: 2006-01-25 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whatdanidigs.livejournal.com
I was totally waiting to a porny ad on to this ep. This is a perfect on too. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-25 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry to distract you from your work! *g*

This darn fic just sort of happened, and yeah, it was jealous John that drove me to it. It's really quite endearing when he gets all snarky like that. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And thank you re: my lj layout. I drove myself crazy with it, lost all of Saturday fussing with different layouts. I wanted warm and inviting and cozy, but I think you're right, I ended up with kinda porny instead. *g* It was fun searching the net for images of silk, though.

Date: 2006-01-25 07:27 pm (UTC)
ext_16366: (McShep Atlantis)
From: [identity profile] cheights.livejournal.com
Oh yes, that was just a perfect coda to that episode. *melts* Rodney telling John to take off his shoes right after musing about almost dying made me chuckle. And I loved John thinking Rodney wasn't getting any more adoration from Noreena -- John was soooo jealous in this episode. Rodney's so cute at the end when he tells John that Zelenka is giving the tour. Hee.

A lovely, hot fic. You always know how to brighten an afternoon. *g*

Date: 2006-01-25 07:35 pm (UTC)
ext_979: (sheppard)
From: [identity profile] saba1789.livejournal.com
Hee, fabulous! Thanks for writing and sharing this :-) .

Date: 2006-01-25 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-autant.livejournal.com
I loved the ep, and your followup even more! ::feels complete:: *g*

I was watching the jealousy and sparks between them, and thinking, "Uh oh. All that energy isn't going to do a thing to help the volcano situation." LOL

I had all sorts of after-effect scenarios going around in my head, but yours is the best of all!

Date: 2006-01-25 07:48 pm (UTC)
ext_1175: (breathtaking by kaesaria)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah. Thank you.

Date: 2006-01-25 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/
I love your porn. I love your Rodney. His voice is great in this, and I particularly loved the happy little hum, and saying he deserved a little adoration, and having Radek take what's her name on the tour but neglecting to mention it... After all, just because Rodney can't LIE doesn't mean he can't manipulate John a little bit, just for fun, and for sexual variety, and a little extra adoration.

*glee*

Date: 2006-01-25 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seikaitsukimizu.livejournal.com
First, yay! Post-Inferno fic.

Second, yay! grrrl wrote Atlantis porn again!

Third, yay! Twas good fic. *nods* Yes, after I finished watching it the first thing I said was "where's the fic with the jealous lovers" because, god...Rodney flirted, then John took her in the end...again.

Fourth, did you notice how she kept her hands behind her back so her chest was thrust out? What kinda scientist is that. Bah. And those heels, that outfit...so not scientist material. Though I wouldn't be surprised if she becomes a semi-regular visitor to the city. What with her crush on Rodney's brain and John's body (huh, the Pegasus Freya?).

Date: 2006-01-25 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
*g* Thank you. I couldn't resist the smutty tag for this one. They were just so irresistible, teasing each other like that.

And Neerna, yeah, I can safely say I never dressed like that in all my years in the lab. Or even in my post-laboratory desk-job years. Still, she amused me, just because she seemed to get such a kick out of both of them. And it's entirely possible that if they showed up at my doorstep, I'd be dressing like that, too. (Okay, so I'd have to go shopping first.)

Freya, LOL, I had to think about for a moment, but you're so right.

Date: 2006-01-25 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I couldn't resist. It was such a *fun* episode.

Date: 2006-01-25 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, sweetie, thank you! Glad I could brighten your day a little.

John was so very, very jealous. He was an utter delight, wasn't he? Cute thing.

Date: 2006-01-25 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I just couldn't resist playing with them. *g*
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