thegrrrl2002: (Rodney looking awfully cute)
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For [livejournal.com profile] chopchica.



Most Favorite Thing

Rodney strides out of his room and nearly runs into John. "Can't talk," Rodney says, waving him aside. "Got to go."

John doesn't move out of Rodney's way. "Go where?" he asks.

"To the--to the--" Rodney stammers. He's nose to nose to with John now, who smells kind of good and has nice lips and shows no sign of getting out of his way. "You know."

"No." John moves forward, crowding Rodney. Leaning a hand on the doorframe, he says, "I don't know."

Rodney takes an involuntary step back. "Oh, come on--" He steps back again, because for god's sake they're in the hallway where anyone can see.

With a sly grin, John follows. The door thankfully slides shut behind him. "What?"

It's hard to breathe with John standing so close. "Lunch. I have to get to the mess," Rodney says, backing up further. "I'm starving and it's--it's--"

"Hmmm?" John tilts his head to one side and his eyes are green and brown and gold and all kinds of pretty.

"Meatloaf," Rodney blurts. "Today is meatloaf day."

"Oh," John says softly. He nods. "Meatloaf."

Somehow John has sidled even closer and there's no way Rodney can breathe now, his pulse is racing and that can't be healthy, can it? "This is so not fair," he manages, just before John's lips brush his.

He tries to step back again but oh, hello wall.

John grins, bumps his nose against Rodney's and kisses Rodney again. "What's not fair?" he asks, then licks Rodney's lower lip.

"Meatloaf." Rodney flattens his back against the wall and attempts a scowl. "With the gravy. You know it's my most favorite thing ever."

John reaches down and runs a finger along the line of Rodney's very hard cock. "Really?"

"Okay, maybe my second most favorite thing ever."

Leaning a hand against the wall beside Rodney's head, John unfastens Rodney's belt.

"Because this?" Rodney gulps a lungful of air before continuing. "This is right up there with the favorite things. Along with the other things you do. So, pretty much everything. Is my favorite."

A brief teasing kiss, involving more tongue than lips, and John starts to unbutton Rodney's trousers.

Rodney squirms. "But right now? Whatever it is you're about to do? That's my number one, undeniable favorite."

John grins again, a lopsided smirk of a grin--also one of Rodney's favorites--and slips his hand into Rodney's boxers.

A cool hand wraps around Rodney's overheated cock and Rodney grabs John's shoulders, shuddering. "Oh, wow."

"Yeah?" John pulls Rodney's cock free and gives it a squeeze.

"Oh, yeah." Rodney's not sure his knees are going to hold, especially when John reaches in cup his balls, fondling and stroking them. He spreads his legs, presses back against the wall and seriously, it is the best thing ever, the way John touches him, the way John always wants to touch him.

John pulls his hand away and Rodney whimpers, fingers twisting in the fabric of John's t-shirt. Then watches, captivated as John licks his palm before reaching back down and John never takes his eyes from Rodney's, even as he fists Rodney's cock with a wet, slick hand. Rodney's not sure what John sees, why it's so fascinating and his cheeks burn hot from John's gaze.

He moans when John starts to stroke. With a push of his hips, he shoves his cock into John's fist and John starts to smile. He looks happy, like taking Rodney apart is one of his most favorite things, too and Rodney wants to kiss John for it, but he's too busy moaning and soon he's lost in the relentless pleasure of John's touch, whispering "please, please, please," for no reason at all.

John leans forward and murmurs, "Better than meatloaf?" His lips touch Rodney's ear and Rodney gasps, it's as if his entire body is electrified.

"Nnngh," Rodney says with a shiver.

"With the gravy?" John asks. He sucks on Rodney's earlobe.

"Maybe?"

John nips Rodney's neck.

Rodney clings to John's hard, wiry body. "Oh god."

John nuzzles Rodney's jaw, and Rodney turns his head to find John's mouth. The kiss is deep and dirty and he feels it all the down into his gut and then John tightens his grip and squeezes just right.

Rodney comes, shaking with pleasure, mouth sliding over John's cheek, it's intense and wonderful and perfect and he has to hang onto John or else go slumping down onto the floor in one big puddle of happy but John seems more then willing to hold him up and kiss him through it.

"God," Rodney pants. He shudders violently as John gives his cock one final stroke, then rests his head on John's shoulder and snuggles in close, leaning on John's chest, doing his best to drape his entire body over John's.

"Jeeze, Rodney," John says, chuckling. "Come here." With an arm around Rodney's waist, he steps away from the wall.

"What? I liked that wall. And I like you," Rodney says, even though John is trying to make him walk with his pants around his ankles and his head up in the clouds. "A lot. Where are we--oh."

His legs bump against his bed and he falls down on it, grinning up at John. Pretty, pretty John. "You're my most favorite thing ever. Oh, look at that." He points to the respectable bulge in John's pants. "I want that. Come on, make with the unzipping."

John ducks his head and laughs, then does exactly that, unzipping and pushing his pants down, taking his boots off, and goes even further by removing his shirt and oh, naked, naked and hard and hairy and climbing onto the bed wearing nothing but a big grin.

Utterly gorgeous and Rodney hugs him tight and yup, meatloaf is nothing compared to this.

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEE, He looks happy, like taking Rodney apart is one of his most favorite things, too, oh, they are ADORABLE, and this is ridiculously hot and so so happy, and it makes me feel all fizzy. :D

Date: 2008-01-22 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay for fizzy! *g*

::basks in your bubbles::

Thank you!

Date: 2008-01-22 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malcolm-stjay.livejournal.com
Oh man, so much with the cuteness. I love Rodney's little lines, the schmoo. Pretty, pretty John. "You're my most favorite thing ever. Oh, look at that." He points to the respectable bulge in John's pants. "I want that. Come on, make with the unzipping." He's like a little kid, except ew, not. What I'm trying to say, I think, is that he's CUTE. And John is cute and hot and.

Just. YAY.

Date: 2008-01-22 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
*g* Thank you so much! When it comes to sex, Rodney seems to me like he'd be all about the artless enthusiasm, and I was trying for that, so yeah, kind of like a little kid.

Yay!!

Date: 2008-01-22 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-autant.livejournal.com
Meatloaf can definitely wait! Especially when faced with a determined John. ::nods:: Plus, it helps to work up an appetite. . . *thinks of Rodney's ravenous eating in a whole new light* :D

Date: 2008-01-22 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I know, when John finally lets Rodney go to the mess (after extended post-coital manly cuddling) he's going to be *starving*. So that really does explain how we see him when he's eating, doesn't it? *g*

Date: 2008-01-22 05:16 pm (UTC)
jb_slasher: enter shikari; common dreads (reading)
From: [personal profile] jb_slasher
Mommy I wet the chair! That was, umm, HOT. I really needed some great porn to make my day. You provide. Thank you for that :)

Date: 2008-01-22 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
You're quite welcome. It was my pleasure! *g*

Date: 2008-01-22 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bbuttercup.livejournal.com
Prowly John... yummmm :o)

Date: 2008-01-22 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! I totally agree.

I'm so glad you liked!

Date: 2008-01-22 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secondalto.livejournal.com
Mmmmmm, yummy. Pornlets on a Tuesday afternoon are a very good thing.

Date: 2008-01-22 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! *g* And yeah. Tuesdays need all the help they can get.

Is it Friday yet?

Date: 2008-01-22 06:20 pm (UTC)
ext_8600: (Rodney - I'm with penis)
From: [identity profile] reedfem.livejournal.com
You do such wonderful things with food.

But now the word meatloaf is going to make me think of the other meat hot sex against a wall.

*ducks and runs away*

Date: 2008-01-22 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
::chases you::

Hey!! *g*

Seriously, it took a great effort not to go there with the whole "meat" thing. Especially when there's gravy involved. ::is so wrong!!::

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Date: 2008-01-22 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chopchica.livejournal.com
*sniff* A puddle of happy! <33333333

Date: 2008-01-22 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay!! *g* And John totally stepped in it.

And that icon totally rocks. He so does.

Date: 2008-01-22 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rasah.livejournal.com
ahh, this is so cute! i love incoherent!rodney :D

Date: 2008-01-22 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
As does John. ::nods firmly::

*g* I'm so glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2008-01-22 08:59 pm (UTC)
aurora: (SGA John Naughty)
From: [personal profile] aurora
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! They're both such adorable, adorable, sexy dorks.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! thank you!

Date: 2008-01-22 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
"But right now? Whatever it is you're about to do? That's my number one,..

♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2008-01-23 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay!! ::smooches::

I'm so glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2008-01-22 09:21 pm (UTC)
ext_2087: SGA (SGA J/R sneaky)
From: [identity profile] tharaist.livejournal.com
Yay! They're so in love, aren't they?!

His legs bump against his bed and he falls down on it, grinning up at John. Pretty, pretty John. "You're my most favorite thing ever.

*sighs happily*

Date: 2008-01-23 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
They're very, very very much in love. *g*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2008-01-22 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com
This is all kinds of joy, right here.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay! *g*

Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-01-22 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
Aw, I love it when the boys have happy sex. And of course John will beat out meatloaf (at least temporarily, LOL).

Date: 2008-01-23 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Rodney has re-ordered his priorities. ::nods firmly::

I think maybe John brought went and got him lunch afterward. *g*

*fans self*

Date: 2008-01-22 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
OK, you managed to use the word "meatloaf" in your story and still make it hot like burning. Very nice! Thank you.

Re: *fans self*

Date: 2008-01-23 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
::laughs:: What, you're saying meatloaf isn't sexy?

*g*

Date: 2008-01-23 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shara50.livejournal.com
Lovely and sweet plus hot:)

Date: 2008-01-23 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2008-01-23 01:45 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (J/R by bluespirit_star)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
This was all kinds of hot, but as usual it's the lines like ...and seriously, it is the best thing ever, the way John touches him, the way John always wants to touch him that make your work so much more than just porn. Lovely.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Rodney needs lots of lovin'. And touching. ::nods firmly:: John is just the man for the job. *g*

Date: 2008-01-23 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillwaters11.livejournal.com
I love the way you write them. This is so guh-inducing, but I also had so laugh how Rodney must have lost a few brain cells along with his orgasm. Pretty, pretty John. "You're my most favorite thing ever. Oh, look at that." He points to the respectable bulge in John's pants. "I want that.

Hee! pure gold!

Date: 2008-01-23 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay! Thank you! I'm totally in love with the idea of Rodney's post-coital giddiness. Because he so would be. Someone who is that wound up all the time would definitely get loopy afterwards. *g*

Date: 2008-01-23 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com
and oh, naked, naked and hard and hairy and climbing onto the bed wearing nothing but a big grin.

I have no idea why, but this phrase just fills me with glee. Giddy, giddy glee.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! I have to admit, I like thinking about that image. Oh yeah. *g*

Date: 2008-01-23 02:49 am (UTC)
ext_2047: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Oh, wondrous! Meatloaf and John! Love Rodney's breathless, broken-up speech, and his morphine-like dreaminess afterwards, and all the hotness in between. John is evil and we all love him for it.

[livejournal.com profile] chopchica is a lucky girl today!

Date: 2008-01-23 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I love a naughty John, too!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2008-01-23 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sihayab.livejournal.com
Yay! Rodney loves John more than meatloaf! With the gravy!

Meatloaf, however, is very miffed and maintains that he'd do anything for love, but he won't do. . . that. ;>

Date: 2008-01-23 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
::laughs and laughs::

Hah! Meatloaf is just jealous. ::nods::

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Date: 2008-01-23 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
AWWW, so sweet and so hot!

Date: 2008-01-23 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2008-01-23 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Oh wow. This was so cute, and sweet, and totally hot. Thanks.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
You are quite welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2008-01-23 04:04 am (UTC)
ext_975: photo of a woof (Rodney)
From: [identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com
"You're my most favorite thing ever. Oh, look at that." He points to the respectable bulge in John's pants. "I want that. Come on, make with the unzipping."

my grin is HUGE! sweet and hot and funny, mmmmmm.....

Date: 2008-01-23 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! *g* I adore giddyRodney. And I just know he'd be that way after John finishes with him. Hee!

Date: 2008-01-23 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com
Hee, "Better than meatloaf?" "This is right up there with the favorite things. Along with the other things you do. So, pretty much everything. Is my favorite." Love the story so cute and hot and how did I go through life never connecting meatloaf to hot sex? :) Thanks for the hotness and the smiles, way to brighten a boring Tuesday.

Date: 2008-01-23 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

And now that I think about it, meatloaf might be the least sexy of foods. ::ponders:: But it just seems like such a Rodney thing. *g*

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