thegrrrl2002: (thoughtful Castiel)
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[livejournal.com profile] eretria was having a bad day, so I wrote a little comment ficlet to try and cheer her up. Dean/Castiel, ~700 words. Rated PG.



Castiel plucks the bottle from Dean's hand, raises it to his lips and swallows.

"Hey," Dean complains. He stumbles in the dark and bumps against Castiel. "Remember what happened last time you were on a bender," he admonishes, reaching for the bottle.

"I am not bent." Castiel holds the bottle out of Dean's reach, swaying gently. "At least not yet."

“Good for you.” Dean curls his fingers around the edge of Castiel’s coat and tugs him closer. “Give it,” he demands, and reaches once again for the bottle.

Castiel moves back, dragging Dean with him and Dean doesn’t let go and okay, maybe that was a mistake because Castiel’s back hits the Impala and Dean’s chest hits Castiel’s and they’re nose to nose and Dean can see the glint of Castiel’s eyes in the moonlight.

“Whoa,” Dean says. “Isn’t this romantic.”

Castiel blinks and Dean swears he feels eyelashes against his cheek. “It is?”

“No,” Dean says with a laugh, stepping back, away Castiel’s warm, solid body.

Lifting the bottle to his lips, Castiel drinks again. He’s propped against the car, legs spread, head tilted back and his throat gleaming white—

Dean shakes his head. “I think I’m kind of bent,” he admits, because his brain is going really weird places right now. When Castiel lowers the bottle Dean snatches it from him and takes a long pull from it. The whiskey goes down smooth but it doesn’t help Dean shake the need to find out if the skin on Castiel’s throat feels as smooth as it looks. “Crazy stuff,” he says randomly.

“No, I believe it is merely whiskey.” Castiel says.

“Yup.” Dean holds the bottle up to look at it, and Castiel tries to take it from him but Dean won’t let go and then Castiel is all up in Dean’s space again, scowling. “All right, all right. Damn you’re a cranky drunk.”

“I am not yet drunk,” Castiel informs him. He’s swaying again, and it’s making Dean dizzy.

Dean clamps a hand to Castiel’s shoulder. “Sure you’re not.”

Castiel lets out a very human-sounding “hummph” and Dean grins. He gives Castiel a little shake. “Come on, we should head back.”

“To where?”

“The motel.” Dean steps back and reaches for his keys, looks at his impala and hesitates. “I think we’d better walk.” He pats the hood of his car. “Later, baby.”

Castiel drains the bottle and wipes his mouth with the back of his hand. “Good. We will get more whiskey.”

Dean peers down the deserted road. No lights, no stores. “No, we won’t.”

“But Dean,” Castiel implores. “This one is empty.”

“Do you see any liquor stores?”

“Then we will find one.” Castiel reaches toward Dean’s forehead with two fingers.

Dean grabs Castiel’s hand, pulling it down. “No, no way.”

“Dean--”

“I am not letting you zap us off somewhere with you when you’re drunk. God knows where we’ll end up.”

Castiel tries to pull his hand free but Dean hangs on, wrapping his fingers around Castiel’s wrist. Castiel stumbles--or maybe it’s Dean who loses his footing, Dean’s not sure--but somehow he ends up with a hand tangled in Castiel’s coat once again, his other hand gripping Castiel’s tightly and now he’s close enough to smell Castiel’s whiskey-soaked breath.

“Great, now we’re holding hands,” Dean says. All this touching is starting to piss him off.

Castiel looks down at their joined hands. “Is it romantic?”

“No, it’s not,” Dean snaps. Castiel is asking too many stupid questions. “This is.” And Dean kisses him. It’s not a nice kiss, Dean puts as much attitude as he can into it, pushing in, trying to make Castiel step back because damn it, he doesn’t want to be kissing Castiel, and yet, here he is. Kissing a stupid friggin’ angel.

Castiel doesn’t move, doesn’t step back. He stays anchored in place as he wraps an arm around Dean’s waist and kisses Dean back with surprising sweetness, a hand gently cupping Dean’s face and suddenly Dean feels light-headed, he can’t breathe, he can’t even think of why he shouldn’t be doing this.

“Fine, be that way,” Dean growls against Castiel’s cheek, and kisses Castiel some more.

Date: 2010-04-29 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eretria.livejournal.com
And it worked! My day is saved! I still adore this to pieces. And will pester you for more before long. Just a fair warning. ;o)

Date: 2010-04-29 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I consider myself warned! *g*

Date: 2010-04-29 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shetiger.livejournal.com
Eee! I love that last line so much. :)

Date: 2010-04-29 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad!! ::smooches you::

Date: 2010-04-29 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pennyplainknits.livejournal.com
Yay! It cheered me up too! (though not as much as knowing that Cas is still alive would)

Date: 2010-04-29 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, we need to see some Cas tonight, damn it. ::glares at TV::

Date: 2010-04-29 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-autant.livejournal.com
Oh god yes! Dean is definitely the one to teach Cas all about the Finer Things in life-- sarcasm, booze, sex. . .

Lucky, lucky Angel! :)

And who knows? We may actually get to see this in canon, given what they've given us so far. *g*

Date: 2010-04-29 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Dean will teach him well. ::nods firmly::

We may actually get to see this in canon, given what they've given us so far.

Oh, if only!!

Date: 2010-04-29 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
and yet, here he is. Kissing a stupid friggin’ angel.

*grin*
*grin grin grin grin grin*

Such a lovely little ficlet and just packed to the brim with Dean attitude. Plus, charmingly drunk Cas will never get old. :-D

Date: 2010-04-29 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed.

I will never get tired of Drunken!Cas either. So cute! And grumpy!

Date: 2010-04-29 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mulder200.livejournal.com
LOL! This was just precious!

Date: 2010-04-29 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2010-04-29 07:50 pm (UTC)
jerusha: (dean & cas)
From: [personal profile] jerusha
Oh, that was absolutely lovely.

Date: 2010-04-29 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked!

Date: 2010-04-29 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangeandcharm.livejournal.com
Oh man, this was adorkable! I love it!

Date: 2010-04-29 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! *g*

Date: 2010-04-29 08:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-29 09:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-29 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] libra-traveller.livejournal.com
Yum, please write more.

Date: 2010-04-29 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
It would hard not to. *g*

Date: 2010-04-29 09:54 pm (UTC)
ext_13391: (SPN: Dean/Casttiel lake & solitude)
From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
This is so beautiful. Perfect characterization and I know you wrote it for someone else, but it was exactly what I needed.
<3

Date: 2010-04-30 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad! Thank you for the kind words. ::hugs::

Date: 2010-04-30 12:01 am (UTC)
ext_16366: (Castiel)
From: [identity profile] cheights.livejournal.com
Awww, that was awesome! You nailed both their voices. I adore Dean trying to keep Castiel from drinking more. And the end is beautifully sweet. Lovely fic!

Date: 2010-04-30 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Very much appreciated. *g* It's always so hard writing in a new fandom.

Date: 2010-04-30 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] novoamor.livejournal.com
Ahhhh so sweet ♥___♥ Wonderful.

Date: 2010-04-30 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2010-04-30 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vivhasarifle.livejournal.com
SQUUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I LOVED it1 Ah, it made my heart melt in all the best ways.

'“I think I’m kind of bent,” he admits, because his brain is going really weird places right now.'

This really made me laugh.

Date: 2010-04-30 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thank you. *g*

Date: 2010-04-30 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psycocatgirl.livejournal.com
Hee! Drunk!kissing FTW! That's really sweet, and I could totally see this scene happening. <3

Date: 2010-05-01 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad! Thank you. *g*

Date: 2010-04-30 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uwalumni2.livejournal.com
I likey! This was cute watching Cas swaying intoxicated :D They are just too cute together! Love these two!

Date: 2010-05-01 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed! Thank you!

Date: 2010-04-30 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisuli.livejournal.com
I think drunken!Castiel may be one of my favorite flavors. This totally made up for the lack of Cas tonight.

Date: 2010-05-01 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Drunken!Cas is an awful lot of fun to write. So glad you enjoyed him! *g*

Date: 2010-04-30 07:22 am (UTC)
ext_267113: (Default)
From: [identity profile] juanitatequila.livejournal.com
AWWWWWWWWWW!! :D

Date: 2010-05-01 05:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-30 08:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangirl1138.livejournal.com
Very nice!
I can picture them perfectly!

Date: 2010-05-01 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the kind words! *g*

Date: 2010-05-12 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] murron.livejournal.com
This? Is totally awesome! I love the balance between the underlying angst and the humor. Cas is adorable and Dean is ... well, he's pretty much Dean.

“Is it romantic?”
:) Priceless!

Such a wonderful piece of writing. Thank you so much for sharing!

Date: 2010-05-12 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, you sweet thing! I'm so glad Dean is Deanish! He can be a tough one. Glad you enjoyed!

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