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This was crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] bagfulloftricks, in response to [livejournal.com profile] burnt_smore's hand!love challenge. Make that a late response. It was a last minute kind of thing, mainly because yesterday was a really slow day at work. I figured it was a good way to keep myself entertained.

It's a Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel ficlet, called:



A Hands-On Kind of Guy

Jack is standing at the kitchen table reading the sports page when Daniel arrives. Actually, he's not really reading it, he's just staring at the headlines. He can't seem to focus on the words. His mind remains on unfinished business-- reports and assignments and that tricky situation with the well-armed natives on P3X-0900.

It bugs the hell out of him that he remembers planet designations now.

"Hey, Jack." Daniel takes off his coat and kisses the back of Jack's neck, a quick brush of lips on skin, and his hand touches Jack's hip. "Did you see the images from SG-12?" he asks breathlessly.

"Yes, Daniel, I did." Of course he's seen them. He sees every single goddamn image from every single goddamn team.

Daniel launches into a discourse as he helps himself to a glass of water, explaining to Jack that the murals on the temple walls seem to be Mycenaean in style but the writing was logographic, maybe even southern tungusic, After a minute, Jack frowns and looks up as if he just realized that Daniel was in the room.

Daniel's exposition grinds to a halt. "Okay. Maybe another time," he says with a small smile. "You all right?"

"Oh yeah. Just dandy."

"Oh." Daniel frowns, thoughtful. After a moment he asks, "Busy day?"

"You could say that." Busy doesn't seem to be the right word for it. It doesn't really describe what it's like to juggle nine off-world teams, three mission briefings, four mission de-briefings and seventeen equipment requests. Not to mention that it may take an executive order by President Hayes to replace the burned-out light bulb in the control room. Jack can't think of another word for it, though, so he supposes that yes, he's been busy, even though he hasn't accomplished a damn thing all day.

Aware that Daniel is watching expectantly, Jack turns to his newspaper and reads the baseball scores once again, not because he cares who won, but because he has nothing else to say. He's been talking to people all day. Not only that, but people have been talking back at him. Talk, talk, talk. Suddenly he's become the most popular man on base. Everyone has something desperately important to share with him.

Daniel tries again. "Have you eaten yet?"

"Had some food-like crap from the commissary." He's not sure how long ago, but he suspects the ache in his gut is not from hunger.

"Okay." Daniel nods. He grows quiet. Jack figures he has left the room, but then he hears Daniel ask, "Do you want me to go? I can leave, it's not a problem."

Jack eyes Daniel again, standing in the middle of his kitchen, rocking on the balls of his feet as if he could move off in any direction, at any moment. It's not a loaded question. Jack knows that if he says yes, Daniel will give him a kiss and leave, without anger or distress. He'll go home and ponder Mycenaean murals, tongue logos and whatnot. Except that would leave Jack by himself, with no distractions to keep his brain from spinning around like the Stargate itself. Jack isn't sure what he needs at the moment, but to be alone with his own thoughts and doubts is definitely not it.

"No," he says, pushing the newspaper aside. "Stay. I'm just--" He waves his hand, helpless, because he doesn't know what he is. "Tired. Frustrated."

All at once Daniel is next to him, touching his shoulder. "A general's work is never done?" he asks, a tentative note to his voice.

"Something like that," he says, vaguely irritated. He doesn't want Daniel's sympathy. He just wants to do his job right. He wants that sense of accomplishment that he used to feel after a hard, dirty off-world mission.

He's not sure how long they stand there, Daniel's hand rubbing slow circles on his back, his face close enough that Jack can feel warm breath on his cheek. He likes the sound of Daniel breathing. It’s a familiar sound, something he knows. Like Daniel himself.

Jack turns around to face him. For a moment Daniel looks as though he's about to speak, but instead he merely pats Jack's shoulder and nods. He steps away, and Jack reaches out, grabbing him by the belt loops and pulling him back in. Daniel's eyebrows rise, and when Jack unsnaps Daniel's jeans, they rise even higher. Jack unzips, slips a hand under Daniel's briefs, pushing past coarse, wiry pubic hair to find Daniel's soft cock. It thickens nicely from his touch, and Jack finds the sensation satisfying. He caresses it, then wraps his hand around the warm length and squeezes. Daniel grunts, closing his eyes.

"Jack, what are you--you don't have to--" Jack squeezes again. "Not that I'm complaining," Daniel adds quickly. When he opens his eyes, they are so intense that Jack has to slide Daniel's glasses off just so he can get a better look. Daniel doesn't flinch. He he's too busy pushing his underwear down past his hips, freeing his cock for Jack.

A few firm strokes and Jack is making Daniel moan out loud. It's the best sound he's heard all day. He works Daniel's cock with both hands, his fists sweeping upward, one after the other, a slow, continuous stimulation that makes Daniel's cock grow rigid, and his breath come quickly.

Jack watches Daniel's naked face, and is gratified by Daniel's reaction to his touch--lips parted, cheeks flushed, eyes heavy-lidded and vague. One hand is gripping the sleeve of Jack's shirt, the other, touching his forearm. When Jack sweeps a palm over the head of his cock, Daniel lets out a soft 'oh', so Jack does it again with the following hand. There's a slick of wetness this time. Daniel makes another small, desperate sound, his eyes opening wide.

"Jack," he pleads. His hips twitch and he rocks forward, pressing his body awkwardly against Jack's. Jack switches to one hand, allowing Daniel to thrust steadily into his fist. He reaches under Daniel's shirt so that he can rub his hand over the hard muscles of Daniel's chest. Daniel is a strong man, but right now he's all but whimpering against Jack's neck. Jack's fingers find a nipple, twisting it roughly, and Daniel begins to really make noise, his hands grasping at Jack's shoulders. Deciding that it's time to let Daniel come, Jack moves his hand faster over the smooth cock, his palm whipping over hot, hard flesh. Daniel cries out sharply, his body shudders, and warm liquid spills over Jack's fingers.

There now, Jack thinks, that's a job well done. He doesn't realize that he is smiling.

He slows his stokes, intent on pulling the last bit of pleasure from Daniel's body. Daniel finally lifts his head and kisses him, lips slack and lazy, his tongue pushing into Jack's mouth. Jack's fingers are dripping wet and now Daniel is cuddling up to him, smearing his shirt with come.

"That was nice," Daniel says at last. He sounds somewhat bewildered.

Jack chuckles and nuzzles Daniel's cheek. He decides that this is pretty good--a warm, relaxed, content Daniel in his arms. Even so, when Daniel's hand slides down his body and strokes his thigh, he turns down the offer, telling Daniel, "Maybe later."

"Oh. Okay." Daniel pulls back, looks Jack in the eye and asks, "How about the talking?"

"Nah. Not so much."

"Food?"

"I'm thinking maybe a cheeseburger." Jack is surprised to find he is genuinely hungry. And there's beer in the fridge, why wasn't he drinking one? "Go get cleaned up. I'll get the food started."

Daniel salutes him. "Yes, sir, general." His pants are still down around his knees and his smile is a mile wide.

It's the finest salute Jack has ever seen.

Date: 2004-09-10 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slb44.livejournal.com
Perfect!

Date: 2004-09-10 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! *g*

Date: 2004-09-10 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephicozar.livejournal.com
I wanna be the general!

Great fic! Much hand love. And Daniel love. And Jack love. And Grrrl love :o)

Date: 2004-09-10 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Awwww, I feel so loved! Thank you.

Date: 2004-09-10 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wickdzoot.livejournal.com
A) I love your Daniel tip of tongue icon.
B) I love the Jack with his index finger raised icon.
C) I love this story, and it's so appropriate. Jack isn't used to being the guy at the desk, and yet he's determined to do the job right.
D) Hands on! Guh.
E) I needed this. Thank you so very much.

Date: 2004-09-10 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! I love your bullet lists. Thank you. And I'm rather fond of that icon, myself. Daniel is so obviously eyeing Jack up. I'm thinking they're in the locker room. *g*

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Date: 2004-09-10 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsy86.livejournal.com
Wow. I loved the contrast in this. Daniel's so willing to do whatever Jack needs him to do to try and help and the one thing Jack needs is let Jack do all the work.

Abso-fucking-lutely brilliant.

Date: 2004-09-10 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Frownie!Daniel, Yay!

Thank you so much for the comment--I was hoping all that would come through. I think Jack misses shooting people. Other than Daniel, that is. *g*

Date: 2004-09-10 08:20 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] nicci-mac.livejournal.com
wibble. Nice way to work out all the frustrations of the day. I must go check out that site on how to give the perfect hand-job and write one of these myself. wooHOO

Date: 2004-09-10 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yes, I definitely think you need to write one of these yourself. With, er, illustrations.

Glad you liked!

Date: 2004-09-10 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/oceana_/
Thank you, just what I needed after the crappy day I had.
Perfect Jack, like always. And sex in the kitchen. I love sex in the kitchen. Daniel seems to like it, too. :-)

Date: 2004-09-10 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I'm all about the kitchen sex, really. I don't know why, but it just really works for me. Glad I'm not the only one.

Sorry you had a crappy day, you poor dear. Hope your evening is more fun.

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Date: 2004-09-10 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karendreamer.livejournal.com
mmmmmmmm, lovely, even I feel much more relaxed now.

Thank you..........

Karen

Date: 2004-09-10 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
My pleasure! Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2004-09-10 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agentotter.livejournal.com
You are so cool. I feel like I'm not cool enough to hang around you, but I'm going to anyway. Because, naturally, you're over here brushing the Persians. ;)

Date: 2004-09-10 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I so love that line.

I'm also not at all cool, but it's really cool that you think I'm cool. ::is proud now::

Date: 2004-09-10 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
Ahh, there's nothing quite like a well done handjob. Just ask Daniel. /g/

Date: 2004-09-12 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh yes, Daniel agrees very much. *g*

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Date: 2004-09-10 02:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] raqs.livejournal.com
it's good to be daniel. :-)

Date: 2004-09-12 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I think Daniel's pretty happy about it, too. *g*

Date: 2004-09-10 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com
*cuddles the nummy fic*

Date: 2004-09-12 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Awww, you're sweet. Thank you!

Date: 2004-09-10 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] destina.livejournal.com
Oh, guh. I love your Jack. Have I ever mentioned that? I'm pretty sure I must have. Love, love, love. He's so...Jack.

I love it when Daniel 'salutes' Jack. :D

Date: 2004-09-12 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! That's such a sweet thing to say. I really appreciate it, because I'm just so into Jack. And the concept of General Jack--so much fodder for fic! (Hint, hint).

Date: 2004-09-10 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] notmonkey.livejournal.com
That's some gooood smut. *steams*

Date: 2004-09-12 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm quite flattered you enjoyed it. ::grows giddy::

Date: 2004-09-10 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirty-diana.livejournal.com
Mmmn, angsty and hot. I love this.

Date: 2004-09-13 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked. And that is one gorgeous icon.

Date: 2004-09-10 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mz-bstone.livejournal.com
Monday, *I* get to come home to Jack.

because, yay!

B

Date: 2004-09-14 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Double yay! We all want to come home to Jack.

Date: 2004-09-10 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skater-g8r.livejournal.com
Oh! god that was so good!! poor general Jack, bless *g*
he got the best salute lol so cute *g*

I was all wistful and flushed at the same time *-))

I'd love a daniel salute icon, have we ever seen him salute? i must go check HD

::goes off to check HD::

Date: 2004-09-14 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetie! Glad you enjoyed it. You know, I don't think we've ever seen Daniel salute. Once he gave a cute little wave to Bra'tec as everyone else was saluting (it was Bra'tec's first episode, I can't remember the name). A very cute moment. But I can't think of any genuine salutes.

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Date: 2004-09-10 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gigitrek.livejournal.com
Loved the fic, great characterization, etc. etc. Really. Very nice.

But what is with your mood picture? Is it yawning? If so, how does that equate with "mellow"? Or is it opening its mouth for a less innocent purpose?

Intriguing.

Date: 2004-09-14 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I have no idea what my mood icon is doing. I thought that was rather strange myself. Yawning? I don't get it.

Date: 2004-09-10 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katie-m.livejournal.com
Nice! Hot and pointy.

Date: 2004-09-14 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Pointy? Hee.

Glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2004-09-11 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamrosalita.livejournal.com
So. Very. Hot.

Date: 2004-09-14 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
That damn icon always makes me giggle. I so love it.

And thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed this!

Date: 2004-09-11 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teand.livejournal.com
He doesn't want Daniel's sympathy. He just wants to do his job right.

Yes. Perfect!

And also really good sex stuff... *g*

Date: 2004-09-14 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I totally dig General Jack. There's so much going on there. Aside from, you know, the porny sex stuff. *g*

Date: 2004-09-12 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoopygirll.livejournal.com
Your stories should come with a warning. . .reading may cause happiness-induced goofiness resulting in embarrassing marriage proposals and inappropriate (not to mention impossible)offers of child-bearing.

I love your Jack and Daniel. They're beautiful. Your Paul Davis is a treat too (Laying Open - Guh!). Please never write about Hammond and Thor though, because I'd have to love them too and. . .and I don't think I'm ready for that. *g*

Date: 2004-09-14 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you, snoopygirll! You're so very sweet! I'm so glad you liked this. I really have this thing about General Jack. And so does Daniel . *g*

I'm glad you liked "Laying Open", too! That was a challenge to write but, you know, Pookie deserves to have some lovin'. Have you read [livejournal.com profile] kylielee1000's sequel to it? It's marvelous and hot and sexy and sweet: http://www.livejournal.com/users/kylielee1000/26651.html.

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