thegrrrl2002: (Danny & Steve are very cute)
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Title: No No No and No
Author: [livejournal.com profile] thegrrrl2002
Fandom: H5O
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: R
Word Count: 1359
Summary: How it might happen.



Danny isn't expecting it, when Steve kisses him. They're simply sitting together on the couch, TV on but not watching, talking about nothing in particular and without warning, for absolutely no reason at all, Steve leans in and presses his lips to Danny's. It's a surprise, how soft Steve's lips are, how sweet and friendly. Without conscious thought, Danny sides a hand around Steve's neck as Steve shifts to test out a different angle, nose softly brushing Danny's cheek.

And then Danny's brain clicks into gear. Steve is kissing him.

"No, no, no," Danny says, pulling away. "And no. Steve, I'm sorry, but this, right here, is a bad idea. A very bad idea. You and me, doing this--it's asking for trouble."

Steve frowns. "Trouble? How is this trouble?"

"Hello--we work together, remember? We're partners, working at a very difficult and dangerous job. Getting involved with one another will result in an emotionally fraught situation--"

"Emotionally fraught," Steve echoes. "We're not already emotionally fraught?"

"Emotionally fraught-er, all right? I'm just saying, if we pursue a romantic relationship, our feelings may very spill over into the workplace. It's just too risky." Danny pats Steve's shoulder--Steve's very broad, muscular shoulder--to try and soften his harsh words. "Okay?"

Steve nods, but he's got a face, a face that says he's about to do something colossally stupid. And then he does just that--he leans for another kiss.

Instinctively, Danny meets him halfway. This time it's not quite so friendly, not nearly as sweet. Steve's mouth is demanding, more urgent, his tongue sliding along Danny's lower lip until Danny opens his mouth and then they're really kissing and---

"Hey, hey hey. Hey." Danny jerks his head back. "Did you not hear what I just said, genius? I am not doing this. I'm not even into guys, although yes, I may have dabbled on that side of the tracks on occasion, enough to know it's not what I'm into and while, yes, I realize there is a certain spark between us, we have to be reasonable about it."

It's possible his words would carry more weight if he wasn't pressed snug up against Steve's side, making it easy for Steve to nuzzle the side of his neck, which is very, very distracting. "Could you please stop that?"

"No," Steve's voice is a whisper in his ear.

"Steven." Honestly, the guy never ever listens to him. "Could you, for once, listen to me?" Danny curls a hand under Steve's jaw and turns his face, which might not have been the best idea, since Steve's mouth is right there and the curve of his lip is fascinating. Steve blinks, his eyelashes tickling Danny's cheek, his nose bumps against Danny's and Danny can't remember what he's talking about even though he's quite certain it was important and they're kissing. Again.

Thing is, Danny likes kissing, he really does. He's missed it, having someone to nose up to and kiss and Steve's a pretty damn good at it, more forceful than Danny's used to, but that's kind of a turn on, especially when Steve cups his face and holds him there and really kisses him, rough and hungry and Danny finds himself clutching Steve's shoulders and trying his best to get closer, he can't stop touching Steve's chest, all that firm muscle and Steve smells like sweat and gunpowder and mangos from the fruit stand Steve had crashed through when he tackled the would-be robber earlier that day and god help him, Danny is starting to find his ridiculous action-hero type moves pretty damn hot.

"Steven," Danny gasps. He's straddling Steve's lap now, hands fisted in Steve's shirt and he has no recollection of how the hell he got there. "What the fuck are we doing?"

Steve's face is flushed, his eyes dark and half-lidded. He licks his lips and Danny wonders just how much action Steve has seen with other guys, how much experience he has, especially with that mouth and he's probably pretty good at sucking cock and just the thought of it takes Danny's breath away.

He backs up off Steve's lap, off the couch, trying to put a safe distance between them. "Would you just stop with the kissing?"

Steve raises his eyebrows. "Me? I should stop?"

"Yes, you. You kissed me, remember."

"Okay. Okay. Know what I think?" Steve asks. "I think you're scared, Danny. You're using the work thing as an excuse. I think because your marriage went to hell, you're afraid to get involved again."

"Scared?" Danny scoffs. "You think I'm scared, do you? Hah." He laughs, because Steve's suggestion is just that ludicrous.

"Yes, Danny, that is exactly what I think. You're scared, because you have such strong feelings for me."

"What?" Danny laughs again. "Strong feelings? For you? You, my friend, are delusional. Maybe I do have feelings for you, but strong is an overstatement. Even though, all right, I'll admit it, there is a small part of me, just a small part," Danny pats his own chest, directly over his heart, "that is afraid of ruining our friendship, since I, yes, for reasons I will never understand, have come to depend upon you and appreciate the fact that you are always there for me, no matter what the circumstances, and it's possible, no, make that highly likely, that if we become romantically involved it's all going to fall apart and you're going to shatter my heart into a thousand tiny pieces and I'm not going to be able to put it back together again and let me tell you, I'm not scared, I'm terrified. Are you happy now?"

Steve leans forward, hands clasped on his lap, his expression soft with understanding. "I get it, Danny. You need a little more time. It's a big step." His voice is gentle and soothing, as if Danny's a high-strung horse that might bolt at any minute.

Danny slaps his forehead. "No, I don't need time, this isn't going to happen--how many more times I can tell you this--maybe I need to try it in a different language? Do I need to learn how to speak SEAL? Or maybe in Pidgin? It's not a matter of me needing time. We are not doing this. End of story."

Apparently Danny's logic has finally gotten through, because Steve slumps back on the couch, eyes downcast, mouth gone sulky. His legs sprawl open and Danny notices that Steve's shirt is pushed up, exposing his stomach and the line of dark hair that leads down into his ridiculous cargo pants. Danny can still feel the soft skin against his fingers, the way Steve's muscles trembled at his touch.

The seconds tick by, Danny standing with his hands in his pocket, uncertain--maybe he should leave, bolt out that door but he can't stop staring at Steve, watching the rise and fall of Steve's chest and then Steve looks up and catches Danny's eye.

"Was that enough time?" Steve asks.

"Yes." Danny nods firmly. "Let's do this."

Steve is up off the couch in an instant, closing in on Danny and kissing him, making him stumble backwards with the sheer force of it and then Steve hustles him up the stairs, into his bedroom. He strips Danny naked and Danny discovers that yes, indeed, Steve can suck cock like a champion, leaving him giddy and breathless and when he's completely undone, incoherent and unable to speak a coherent word, never mind string words into a sentence, Steve rolls him over and fucks him, slow and tender until it feels like Danny's heart is going to explode from the sheer wonder of it all. And afterward when they're both sated and exhausted and wound tightly around each other, Steve whispers 'now that wasn't so scary, was it?" and Danny tells him to stop it, oh my god just stop it, please. Because he's never ever going to admit that with Steve holding him tight, nothing scares him, he feels as though he can take on the entire world single-handed.

Okay, maybe at some point in the future he will admit that to Steve. But not just yet.

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Date: 2011-03-26 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feather-autant.livejournal.com
It's the pouty face that did it. ::nods firmly:: You know that Steve can use that to his best advantage.

Or maybe it was the kiss itself? With lips like that? Oh yeah.

But then you have the muscles and soft skin. I'll bet Steve smells good, too.

Hell, it's the whole package! Who can resist that? Certainly not Danny. :)

Date: 2011-03-26 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
It's definitely the face. Or the kiss. Or all the muscles. Or all of the above. :D

Glad you liked, sweets!

Date: 2011-03-26 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Love this! Loved Steve just going for it and Danny all 'what? what? no,no' and then kissing Steve as much as Steve is kissing him.

I laughed out loud when Steve was all 'is that enough time?' He knows his Danny.

Date: 2011-03-26 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad you liked! Steve definitely knows his Danny. He figures Danny will get himself all excited, run himself around in circles until he's exhausted, and then agree with him. :D

Date: 2011-03-26 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeeeeee! Oh I love how sure Steve is of himself, and of himself and Danny, and asd;fladskfjd Danny being all derailed by Steve's mouth and Steve's belly is . . . very very understandable. :> They are adorable!!

Date: 2011-03-26 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Danny's temperamental. Like the car, and Steve knows how to get his car up and running, doesn't he? :D

I'm so tickled you liked this!

Date: 2011-03-26 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellalaine.livejournal.com
There are too many ways to tell you how freaking perfect this was. I love how Danny's speaking no yet his body is saying oh hell yes and he ends up in Steve's lap.

And then the absolute bestest? "Was that enough time?" Steve asks. I can TOTALLY HEAR Steve say that.

Lovely.

Date: 2011-03-26 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! You are too kind! :D

And I just love Danny in Steve's lap. He totally belongs there. He just doesn't know it yet.

Date: 2011-03-26 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] casspeach.livejournal.com
This is awesome, and funny.

Especially 'was that enough time?' 'yes'

Thank you

Date: 2011-03-26 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, especially that line. Steve's got Danny's number, all right. :D

Date: 2011-03-26 08:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
The seconds tick by, Danny standing with his hands in his pocket, uncertain--maybe he should leave, bolt out that door but he can't stop staring at Steve, watching the rise and fall of Steve's chest and then Steve looks up and catches Danny's eye.

"Was that enough time?" Steve asks.

"Yes." Danny nods firmly. "Let's do this."


Oh my god, I can see this happening so easily. Love it. :)

Date: 2011-03-26 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad! ::hugs::

Date: 2011-03-26 08:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] webbgirl.livejournal.com
*G* This was great. Like Danny or any mere mortal could resist the pout *and* those abs. Just not possible.

Date: 2011-03-26 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Honestly. There's no saying 'no' to him. :D

Date: 2011-03-26 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gyri.livejournal.com
"Was that enough time?" Steve asks.

"Yes." Danny nods firmly. "Let's do this."



\o/

Date: 2011-03-26 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! So glad you liked!

Date: 2011-03-26 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duffy-99.livejournal.com
Oh my! Just...oh. fuckin'. my!

Date: 2011-03-26 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-03-26 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com
Steve is well versed in Danny speak and also very stubborn and very pouty. Pouting Steve and a rucked up shirt are sure fire ways to get to Danny. Who can resist soft skin and trembling muscles? So they thought it over and couldn't resist each other. Everyone is now hot, sweaty, sated and happy. Win! Wonderful story.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Steve's got Danny all figured out. Much to Danny's chagrin. :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-03-26 09:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] vickita.livejournal.com
Okay, this is adorable, *and* it kind of took my breath away, there. Guh. Go, takecharge!Steve!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

I'm kind of fond of takecharge!Steve, too. As is Danny. But he won't admit it. :D

Date: 2011-03-26 09:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] cheights.livejournal.com
"Was that enough time?" Steve asks.

Hee! *loves*

I love how well Steve knows Danny, barreling right through Danny's freakout. For Danny, when it comes to Steve, resistance is futile. *g* Awesome fic!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Danny's freakouts just kind of wash right over Steve at this point. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the kind words.

Date: 2011-03-26 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elayna88.livejournal.com
This is both so adorable and so hot!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

And that icon makes me laugh and laugh. A great scene, truly.

Date: 2011-03-26 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiny-starlight.livejournal.com
Oh God *hearts in eyes*

That was perfect. I loved Danny's stream on consciousness, and the last bit made me laugh so loudly. Brilliant job on this

Date: 2011-03-27 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! And that I could make you laugh! \o/

Date: 2011-03-26 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skeddy-kat.livejournal.com
Oh look, dessert! And I haven't even had dinner yet.
Yummy!!!!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
It's always good to have dessert first. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2011-03-26 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cattraine.livejournal.com
Oh, Steve! You were smooth that time, buddy! Sometimes you just have to bulldoze right over Danno to get what you want.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Smooth Dog is SMOOTH. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2011-03-26 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
I feel like I'm always leaving the same comment to your fic, but, yet again, this is glorious & lovely & practically perfect in every way! ♥
(I also think the ♥ symbol was made just for you. :) )

Date: 2011-03-27 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, sweetie, you are too kind! ::smooches::

I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Date: 2011-03-26 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayj530.livejournal.com
Ahaha, I love this. Sometimes Danny is just so full of ~feelings~ that he has to argue about things or else he will explode. Even if he just ends up contradicting himself. ^_^

Also, I sympathize with Danny - Steve!belly is impossible to resist.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Danny has many feelings! They all come bursting out at once! And yet Steve!belly derails it all. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2011-03-27 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wpadmirer.livejournal.com
Damn, you write this pairing SO well. I love Danny's voice, and you capture it and make me smile and then it's also hot, so I'm all agoggle.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, you, you're making me blush. Thank you so much, I'm very flattered!

::hugs::

Date: 2011-03-27 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com
Eeeee!!! So much love for this! Danny's rant and Steve being his direct and to the point self! <3 LOVE!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Steve knows to just let Danny run himself out. :D

I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-27 12:56 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-03-27 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hey you! Thank you! :D I'm happy to see you here!

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From: [identity profile] raqs.livejournal.com - Date: 2011-03-29 02:59 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2011-03-27 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perspi.livejournal.com
YES, that was excellent, with the way Danny was trying, so hard, to say no to himself, really, and the way Steve knew better and just waited it out, and YES, EXACTLY. I love it. :)

Date: 2011-03-27 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Yeah, Steve knows just how Danny's mind works. :D At least sometimes.

I'm so tickled you enjoyed this!

Date: 2011-03-27 02:37 am (UTC)
esteefee: BTS shot of Alex O'Loughlin's belly (alex_belly)
From: [personal profile] esteefee
"Was that enough time?" Steve asks.

hahahah!!! Canon. totally canon.

oh, fraught-er times lie ahead. ::dies::

Date: 2011-03-27 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hi, Steve's belly! love that icon so very much. And it's so appropriate. Danny just had his hands all over that. ::nods firmly::

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, you sweet thing, you!

Date: 2011-03-27 03:06 am (UTC)
ext_86641: (Default)
From: [identity profile] supergreak.livejournal.com
This is total win. I love how Danny's arguing while kissing.

Date: 2011-03-27 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Danny is a man of many talents. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2011-03-27 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com
AWWWWWW! So nice!

if we become romantically involved it's all going to fall apart and you're going to shatter my heart into a thousand tiny pieces and I'm not going to be able to put it back together again and let me tell you, I'm not scared, I'm terrified.

But Steve knows better. :)

Date: 2011-03-27 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Yes, indeed, Steve knows Danny very well, doesn't he? :D
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