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thegrrrl2002I hate conference applications that are contradictory. Do you want a specific number of words, or a specific number of lines? Make up your damn minds, because's it's not the same thing. And why haven't you called me back to let me know? I'm sure that meeting you were in is over by now.
At least it's not due tomorrow, like I initially thought. Hee. It's due in a week. I'm such a dork.
So anyways, I decided I deserved to play a bit. Plus, 'zoot inspired me. It's an Atlantis ficlet, Sheppard/McKay. Written on the fly, will probably make me cringe when and if look at it tomorrow. But I was in the mood for some naughty stuff.
Rodney loves the way John pulls his knees to his chest and waits for Rodney to fuck him, watches and waits with an expectant little smile, so happy, as if Rodney is about to give him the best present ever. Rodney is more than happy to oblige, to shove his cock right up John's ass. It's always so smooth and easy going in, no resistance, John is always open and eager. John is always hot and slippery. He slings his legs over Rodney's shoulders and sighs in delight, and when Rodney bites his nipples he moans so loud that Rodney is sure that Ford, sleeping the bedroom down the hall, hears them. The only way to keep him quiet is to kiss him, to swallow up the moans so they don't go sneaking down the hallway but directly into Rodney instead.
Rodney loves the way John squirms and writhes around his cock, loves the way he gets hot and crazy, pulling at Rodney's arms, shoving his tongue down Rodney's throat, arching up against him. Rodney ends up having to hold onto his hips and give him a good pounding. It gives him a chance to watch John jerk himself off, which he does with gusto, going at with both hands. John gets quiet when he's close to coming, a small noise here and there, a grimace on his face as if he's trying to calculate pi to the last digit. When he comes he's actually very quiet, but his body isn't. It's almost more than Rodney can bear, muscles clenching his cock, fingers digging into his biceps. Rodney tries to hang on, he thinks of wormholes physics and lemons but he isn't strong enough to resist, he always comes within seconds of John.
Afterward, John doesn't let him go. He makes Rodney stay there, kneeling between his legs and shivering through the aftershocks. He makes Rodney stay inside of him as long as possible while he lays there with arms flung out and come pooled on his stomach. Eventually Rodney's cock slips out, and John always looks regretful and a little hurt. And then he still doesn't let Rodney go, even though Rodney has work to do. Rodney has analyses running that need to be monitored, he has data to gather, reports to review, but John insists it can wait until tomorrow. He makes Rodney lay with him, on top of him, actually. He talks to Rodney and licks him and kisses him sweetly.
Rodney always ends up telling John something that he never meant to, and almost always, at some point, Rodney ends up laughing with John over something stupid and silly that just shouldn't be funny at all.
After John falls asleep, Rodney always thinks about leaving, but never does.
At least it's not due tomorrow, like I initially thought. Hee. It's due in a week. I'm such a dork.
So anyways, I decided I deserved to play a bit. Plus, 'zoot inspired me. It's an Atlantis ficlet, Sheppard/McKay. Written on the fly, will probably make me cringe when and if look at it tomorrow. But I was in the mood for some naughty stuff.
Rodney loves the way John pulls his knees to his chest and waits for Rodney to fuck him, watches and waits with an expectant little smile, so happy, as if Rodney is about to give him the best present ever. Rodney is more than happy to oblige, to shove his cock right up John's ass. It's always so smooth and easy going in, no resistance, John is always open and eager. John is always hot and slippery. He slings his legs over Rodney's shoulders and sighs in delight, and when Rodney bites his nipples he moans so loud that Rodney is sure that Ford, sleeping the bedroom down the hall, hears them. The only way to keep him quiet is to kiss him, to swallow up the moans so they don't go sneaking down the hallway but directly into Rodney instead.
Rodney loves the way John squirms and writhes around his cock, loves the way he gets hot and crazy, pulling at Rodney's arms, shoving his tongue down Rodney's throat, arching up against him. Rodney ends up having to hold onto his hips and give him a good pounding. It gives him a chance to watch John jerk himself off, which he does with gusto, going at with both hands. John gets quiet when he's close to coming, a small noise here and there, a grimace on his face as if he's trying to calculate pi to the last digit. When he comes he's actually very quiet, but his body isn't. It's almost more than Rodney can bear, muscles clenching his cock, fingers digging into his biceps. Rodney tries to hang on, he thinks of wormholes physics and lemons but he isn't strong enough to resist, he always comes within seconds of John.
Afterward, John doesn't let him go. He makes Rodney stay there, kneeling between his legs and shivering through the aftershocks. He makes Rodney stay inside of him as long as possible while he lays there with arms flung out and come pooled on his stomach. Eventually Rodney's cock slips out, and John always looks regretful and a little hurt. And then he still doesn't let Rodney go, even though Rodney has work to do. Rodney has analyses running that need to be monitored, he has data to gather, reports to review, but John insists it can wait until tomorrow. He makes Rodney lay with him, on top of him, actually. He talks to Rodney and licks him and kisses him sweetly.
Rodney always ends up telling John something that he never meant to, and almost always, at some point, Rodney ends up laughing with John over something stupid and silly that just shouldn't be funny at all.
After John falls asleep, Rodney always thinks about leaving, but never does.
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Date: 2004-09-30 02:05 pm (UTC)Lemons? Huh?
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Date: 2004-09-30 08:42 pm (UTC)And I'll take 'sort of funny' anytime! I was thinking 'sort of pretentious', actually, but I like your opinion better. *g*
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Date: 2004-09-30 02:07 pm (UTC)Thud. Guh. Yeah, he does.
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Date: 2004-09-30 04:05 pm (UTC)::thud::
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Date: 2004-09-30 08:47 pm (UTC)All this bottom Sheppard stuff is your fault, you know.
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Date: 2004-09-30 08:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-30 02:22 pm (UTC)I see what you mean by cute and fluffy Shep. Not that this is a bad thing, mind you. :)
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Date: 2004-09-30 08:48 pm (UTC)I think.
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Date: 2004-09-30 02:49 pm (UTC)B
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Date: 2004-10-01 06:27 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2004-09-30 03:46 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-10-01 06:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-10-01 07:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-30 03:49 pm (UTC)Second, love the fic.
It's a wonderful portrait of them and I can readily imagine exactly the dynamic you describe here. I like the contrast between John being noisy during the fucking and silent when he comes, except for his body.
And post-sex confidences and laughter and Rodney can't leave even if he thinks he should.
Really well done so don't hate it in the morning.
You can hate me in the morning if you like, but not the fic. /g/
Had some stray thoughts about the butt plug problem and I may have a solution. Yay.
And some lickable Sam, just for you.
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Date: 2004-10-01 06:34 am (UTC)Had some stray thoughts about the butt plug problem
You know, that's the kind of comment I just love to find in my journal. *g* And I can't wait to see the fic! Because, you know, toys. It's all good.
::pets Sam::
Mmm...naughtiness...
Date: 2004-09-30 05:51 pm (UTC)Way to raise the bar.
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Date: 2004-10-01 06:35 am (UTC)Glad the characterizations worked. It's like I need these little practice sessions to get them fixed in my head.
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Date: 2004-09-30 06:13 pm (UTC)Karen
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Date: 2004-10-01 05:42 pm (UTC)Glad you liked!
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Date: 2004-09-30 06:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-10-01 05:45 pm (UTC)Okay, I just noticed your icon. It's fabulous. *g* I adore Rodney so very much.
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Date: 2004-09-30 06:52 pm (UTC)Yay for happy fic!
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Date: 2004-10-01 05:46 pm (UTC)So glad you liked!
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Date: 2004-09-30 07:34 pm (UTC)I believe I would swoon over your grocery list.
Say, what would happen if this here little snippet ended up in the middle of, say, a conference application? (Had a flashback to a horrible email I send out once by mistake.) The perils of being naughty at work.
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Date: 2004-10-01 05:48 pm (UTC)Oooh, was that email ENT-related? A couple of years back? I think I remember something about that. I'm obsessively cautious at work, about anything slash related being left on my computer, even though I'm the only one with a password for it.
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Date: 2004-09-30 07:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-10-01 05:50 pm (UTC)Pretty icon, pretty man, but I'd like to see some evidence that he *isn't* simple. Face it, he just wants to frolic between the sheets with Rodney. That's the only vibe I'm getting.
Okay, so my mind is always in the gutter, can't help myself.
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Date: 2004-09-30 09:49 pm (UTC)But your fics are dragging me into SGA fandom. The show would be ten times better if the guys were like this, all sweet and snarky and sated.
Naive little woobie like me always thought that fanfic came *after* the show-love, see. I was absolutely stunned that fanfic communities were started for Atlantis before a single episode had even aired. "How can they know they'll like the guys at all?" I asked myself.
And now I find myself wanting to rewatch the episodes to see when the guys started doing it. And I think it's all your fault.
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Date: 2004-10-01 05:56 am (UTC)Woobie!
Date: 2004-10-01 06:43 am (UTC)No argument here! *g* I think it would make the show very interesting.
I don't know about other folks, but I was excited (in a cautious way) about the show as soon as I heard McKay was going to be in it. I loved him in SG1. Then I saw how pretty Sheppard was and figured there'd be some potential there.
now I find myself wanting to rewatch the episodes to see when the guys started doing it
I'll gladly take the blame for that. And I suspect they started doing it even before they left for Atlantis. So many cute little moments together.
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Date: 2004-10-01 09:33 am (UTC)