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Some smutty fun with Sheppard and McKay. A by-the-number PWP, smut smut and then warm fuzzies. I'm so predictable, aren't I?




"Major," Rodney called out. "Hold up--"

John turned and squinted at Rodney, silhouetted against the sunlight. "Rodney?"

Rodney trotted closer, and John could see that he was excited about something, smiling his crooked little I've-got-a-secret smile. Waiting for Rodney to reach him, he wondered what it was that had gotten the man all wound up. A new way to power up the shields? New weapons? Mysterious new Ancient devices? A new coffee-growing trading partner?

He liked when Rodney was excited. He was learning that an excited and enthusiastic Rodney could be very, very fun. Breathtakingly fun.

Rodney reached him, his momentum carrying him past John. He spun on a heel, turning to face him. "Look what I found. In the stockroom. A whole entire case of it." He waved a tube in front of John's face.

Curiosity piqued, John asked, "A case? A case of what?"

"Lube," Rodney whispered, stepping backward as John approached, staying just out of reach.

It took a moment to register. "Lube?"

"Lube. Lube-ri-cant." Rodney waved the tube again as he backed away. John snatched his wrist, stopping him.

"Oh," he said, reading the label. "Ooooh," he said again, as the implication sank in. "You mean--?"

"Exactly," Rodney told him, with a stab of his finger. "Wanna do me? I mean, *really* do me?"

Said with a happy little grin as he rocked on the balls of his feet, and John felt a jolt of pure excitement straight down into his cock. "Now?" It was the middle of the afternoon, but already he was imagining the feel of Rodney's naked skin against his.

"Yes, now," Rodney explained. "I have nothing earth-shattering going on at the moment. Do you?"

"You know, as a matter of fact, no, I don't," John answered, his voice rough because his mouth had gone oddly dry. They were going to do it; they were going to take that step, weren't they? "Let's, uh," he motioned with his hand, "go and--you really want to do this, right?"

He supposed that was a dumb question, because Rodney looked at him with a mixture of affection and irritation. But he merely nodded, put a hand on John's shoulder and said, "Yes John. Yes I do."

Spoken with a teasing light in his eyes, but John didn't mind. It was a short stroll to the living quarters, striding side by side, shoulders bumping, while Rodney chattered on about god-knows-what, both of them trying to be oh-so-casual. John was hyper-aware of what was in Rodney's pocket, and what was going on in his own pants. Thank goodness for loose pants. Even so, he was sure it was blindingly obvious what they were about to do, that it was written on their faces as they walked past other residents--oh yes, we're going to have sex now, we're going to Rodney's room so I can shove my cock up his ass, isn't that nice? Please hold all my calls, thank you.

Once safely inside, he watched Rodney kick off his shoes while pulling his shirt off over his head, as if trying to get all his clothes off at once. Rodney shoved his pants down, revealing a pale, nicely rounded ass and John's hands instinctively reached for it, two firm handfuls, wasn't that nice?

"Naked, John. This works a whole lot better if we're naked," Rodney said over his shoulder. "Both of us."

"Nooo," John said with mock astonishment. He gave Rodney's ass a final squeeze. "I hadn't known that."

"Although--" Rodney frowned, sitting on the bed, big hard cock bouncing happily as he kicked his ankles free of his trousers, "the idea of just the gun-holster with your thigh strap is terribly appealing, but we can save that for a later date."

"My gun strap?" John blinked halfway through trying to pull his shirt off while staring at Rodney's cock. Rodney wanted him to--okay now, that was weird, definitely weird. "You're kidding, right?"

A smug little grin, hinting of all kinds of strange kinks and no, Rodney wasn't kidding at all. "Naked," Rodney reminded him with a wave of his hand.

His gun strap? Whenever he thought he had Rodney figured out, Rodney surprised him with something new. Just like when he had been convinced that Rodney was an arrogant, self-serving bastard, he had been a hero and risked his life selflessly to save others. And when he had been absolutely certain that Rodney hated his guts, Rodney had cornered him in a deserted corridor and kissed him.

But now Rodney was naked, naked and hard and laying back on the bed watching him and now wasn't the time for pondering all things Rodney, because Rodney was naked and Rodney wanted him. Just like how he had wanted Rodney from the first moment he had laid eyes on him at the icy Ancient's outpost in Antarctica.

John stripped off his clothes. Oh yeah, he was going to fuck Rodney; he was going to shove his cock right up inside of Rodney's body. He was going to own Rodney, and it was going to be good, so god damn good.

Hopefully.

He let Rodney pull him down onto the bed, warm body, arms encircling him. "Hello, Major," Rodney said, voice low and warm.

"Hi." A welcoming kiss, slow and sweet, warm skin against his and a thigh sliding in between his legs. It was all good, like soaring effortlessly in a 'jumper, silent and still while the world rushed past beneath him.

Rodney made a happy sound and pulled John closer, his hand gliding slowly over John's ass, then wrapped around his cock. That was an even bigger rush, that Rodney would touch him like that. And what they were going to do next, what Rodney was going to permit him to do--

"Rodney," John whispered against his cheek, "you do know I don't know what I'm doing, right?"

Rodney raised his head. "It's not complicated. You'll see. My ass, your dick, a little lube--believe me, it'll work."

John nodded, unconvinced. "Of course it will work," he said, "I know that. It's just that--I may not be--"

"You're nervous, aren't you?" Rodney said with a smug, 'I've got your number now' expression.

"No, I'm not," John denied. "I'm fine. I just hate feeling all inexperienced."

"Nervous," Rodney sang out. "Nervous, nervous, nervous."

John sank his teeth into Rodney's shoulder.

"Oh," Rodney breathed.

It wasn't an ow-stop-that-it-hurts "oh", but a shivery, do-that-again-and-I'm-going-to-come "oh".

"You liked that," John accused, surprised and disturbingly turned on and thank you, he didn't need to know that about himself. He licked the reddened skin.

"Yes, I did. I liked it a lot. What, like you don't have any kinks?" Rodney mouthed John's neck, his stiff cock poking John's stomach.

"Sure I do."

"You want to do it in the jumper, don't you?"

Was he that transparent? "Maybe," he hedged.

Rodney smiled triumphantly. "Hah, I knew it." He fondled John's cock. "The minute you sit in that pilot's seat you get hard. And I've seen you fondling those controls. Kinky, John, very kinky."

"I do not." He didn't do that, did he? Even though the jumper was cool. Very cool. And Rodney, constantly standing behind him, breathing down his neck, being so damn sarcastic, it was a wet dream come true. "You shouldn't be staring at my crotch all the time."

He found the lube, uncapped it, and touched a drop of it to his finger. Slippery, very slippery, he thought, rubbing it between his fingers. They were going to do it. Sex. Intercourse. Making love. Fucking. Whatever. He really wasn't sure what it was they did together. It wasn't all romantic and sweet like being with a girl, because this was Rodney, for heaven's sake. Rodney definitely wasn't warm and fuzzy, although sometimes, when John woke to nuzzling and that warm, happy grin first thing in the morning, he wasn't quite so sure.

"I only stare at your crotch when I can't stare at your ass," Rodney was saying. "Give me that." He took the tube from John's hand. "Fingers."

John held his hand out and Rodney smeared the liquid over his first two fingers. "Kind of cold, isn't it?"

"It will warm up, believe me." He rolled onto his back.

John reached over, feeling oddly hesitant, even though hell, he'd done this with Rodney in the shower, jerking him off while pushing a soapy finger up his ass. This felt different, it was leading somewhere else. It wasn't going to be just his fingers this time. Which evidently wasn't a big deal to Rodney, even though it was to John. But could he could play it like it wasn't, really, he could.

He touched the small round opening and Rodney breathed in sharply. Cold, John thought, his fingers were too cold, but Rodney looked happy and relaxed, eyes half-closed, so John pushed in, one finger sliding into the hot, tight little space.

His dick would never, ever fit in there.

"John, really, I'm not going to break," Rodney told him.

"I know, I know, I'm just--" He pushed his finger in further, and Rodney moved, his ass pushing against John's hand.

"See, not breaking," Rodney breathed. With a small moan stretched his arms out over his head. "It's just a little tight, been a while, you know?"

"How much of a while?" John's finger was pushed out, so he pushed it back in, added a second, working it past the tight ring of muscle. See, no big deal.

"Oh, um, a while while, I suppose. I don't know," Rodney mumbled. He sighed blissfully. "Too long. Jeeze, that's good."

"Really?" John asked, pressing a kiss against the gentle slope Rodney's back. Rodney's ass was round and ridiculously appealing, and the sight of his fingers disappearing down in between was hot, very hot. Whenever he pushed in really deep and felt around, Rodney whimpered and shifted his hips, so he seemed to be something right. All the while was Rodney was rubbing his cock against the sheets. He was enjoying it. John knew Rodney liked having his ass played with, something he had always shied away from, and Rodney never pushed him about it. But the way Rodney moaned--clearly, there was something to it. He crawled over to kneel between Rodney's legs, reaching underneath and finding Rodney 's cock. It was incredibly hard, and Rodney trembled at his touch, rising up on to his knees. John's fingers were getting a little numb, tight muscles, small space, fuck, he could imagine how that was going to feel when he was inside.

"Okay, do it," Rodney groaned. "I'm ready now. Definitely ready. Been ready for months."

"All right, all right," John said, sliding his fingers out. "Like this, right? You want to do it just like this?" His cock twitched, and oh yeah, his cock definitely wanted to do it just like this.

"Uh huh. This is easiest, this works for me, just use a lot of lube, okay? No such thing as too much lube. Believe me."

Lube? John patted the blankets in search of the white tube, because that was Rodney's ass right before him, Rodney on his knees and elbows, rump in the air, waiting for John to fuck him, and John couldn't find the lube anywhere, and he really didn't want to screw this up. Or fuck it up. He wanted to fuck Rodney, not things. Not fuck things up.

Screw it. He wasn't sure his brain was ever going to work properly again.

Hah. Lube. Right beside Rodney's knee.

John grabbed it, squeezed some into his palm, rubbed it over his cock, lots of it, oh god, cold, cold, cold, easing the throbbing in his gut somewhat. He shuffled closer to Rodney's ass, his smooth, pale ass, little golden-brown hairs curling all around it and he wondered if he should say something romantic, something sweet, because he was crazy about Rodney, just crazy, and Rodney was going to let him do this, and did Rodney know how crazy he was about him? He might even be in love with Rodney, wasn't that a kicker, he had to come halfway across the universe to fall in love with a brilliant, sarcastic, and very male physicist.

"John, is something confusing you back there? Do I have to call Beckett in a basic physiology lecture? I'm sure he as some charts." Rodney's voice was muffled as his head slumped down into the pillow. "Just fuck me already, okay?"

"Just--just hold your horses." John grabbed Rodney's hip with a hand that definitely was not trembling and pushed his cock against the cleft of Rodney's ass, guiding it with his other hand, seeking and finding--oh god, that was it, a little push--more pushing and suddenly all was hot and snug around the head of his cock, but it wasn't going anywhere, and he didn't know if he should push harder. Then Rodney relaxed and he slid in further, Rodney was pushing back against him, and all that noise, it was Rodney moaning and oh shit he was going to come.

"Rodney--Rodney--oh damn," he gasped, bending over Rodney's body, resting his head against his back. He slid in so deep his balls were brushing against Rodney's ass. Rodney was so utterly warm and soft on the inside, and damn it, John wasn't going to come, not yet, he could hold on, he could do it, he wasn't some god damn teenager anymore and he had every intention on showing Rodney one hell of a good time.

He wrapped an arm around Rodney's waist, and Rodney put a hand over his, fingers clutching. "Oh, that's good," Rodney said. "Thank you, thank you, that's very good."

John loved the tone of his voice, the low, throaty quality, so desperate. John reached lower, finding Rodney's cock, solid and heavy, and when he touched it Rodney shook all over. He kissed Rodney's back, licked the sweat from his skin. Yeah, he was fucking Rodney, he was doing it--moving his hips slow and easy, eliciting soft gasps of delight every time he pushed in.

More confident now, John leaned back, pushing Rodney's legs further apart, tucking his knees right up against Rodney's, digging his toes in and really working it, pumping his hips, thrusting hard into the slippery heat. Oh yeah. He was good. Damn good. Rodney was moaning for him, he was going to make Rodney beg, make him come so hard he wouldn't be able to talk for *minutes*. Fingers digging into Rodney's hips, fitting nicely over the hipbones--oh fuck--

--pulled too far out--

"Son of a bitch, sorry Rodney--" An inarticulate cry from beneath him as John fumbled with his cock, he couldn't believe it slipped out like that, how awkward, and he needed to get inside Rodney again, right now, damn it.

Rodney pulled his legs up and rolled over, glaring up at him. "For god's sake, John, just pretend it's your P90, okay? You've got better aim with that." He slung his legs over John's shoulders, grabbed a pillow from overhead and tucked it under his ass. "Waiting," Rodney sang out, face and chest flushed red, skin moist with sweat. He cupped his balls, drawing them up and out of the way.

"Oh," John said, startled at the change in position. This worked, too. There was his target, right there. In a second he was sinking back into that heat, into Rodney's willing body, his willing, moaning body, squirming around his dick. Supporting a leg with one hand, he leaned over and propped himself up with the other. Cool, this was very cool, he could really thrust this way and he could watch Rodney jerk himself off too. Rodney, lost in pleasure, face intent, lips parted. John felt the heat building up, curling around his spine, balls tightening up. Seeing Rodney, so exposed, expression intent--he was beautiful, Rodney was amazing to watch, and nobody else got to see this side of Rodney, this was all for him, and him only.

Rodney reached out, hand grasping John shoulder, eyes barely open as he cupped John's face. John turned his head and mouthed his palm, full of sweat and salt. He was going to come, so Rodney had better come, soon, because he'd be damned if he came before Rodney did.

A low, ragged cry and Rodney--oh god, Rodney came, muscles gripping John's cock, come running through his fingers onto his chest. John didn't know it would be like this, didn't know he'd feel Rodney's orgasm from the inside and that made his cock happy, all too happy and whoa, there it was, he was coming too, all bright lights and good times and incredible feeling.

"Oh, Rodney," he moaned, slowly collapsing down onto Rodney's body. "Oh, wow." His cock slipped out--no, was pushed out--by Rodney's still-twitching muscles and his body was limp, his body was never going to work again, and he did it, he had fucked Rodney, clumsily, but at least Rodney came. "Okay, was that the worst sex you've ever had?" he asked with a huff of laughter, face down on Rodney's chest.

"Oh yes, John," Rodney breathed. "Don't ever make me come that hard again. A truly nightmarish experience." He kissed the top of John's head, then wrapped his arms around John's body. "You idiot, you."

John kissed Rodney's throat, then licked his jaw. Sweaty. Sweat and good and maybe he was an idiot. But he was lying on top of Rodney in slick of come and Rodney's arms were around him, so maybe being an idiot in Rodney's eyes wasn't such a bad thing. He listened to Rodney's steady breathing, and after a while he kissed Rodney's chest and said, "This is kind of a big thing for me."

"Mmmwhuh?"

John pushed himself up on his elbows, and Rodney blinked at him, befuddled, sleepy, and, god help him, cute. "This. Us doing this. I think it's a big deal," John explained, more tentatively than he wanted.

"What, and you think I let anyone with a dick fuck me?" Fully awake now, and Rodney spoke sharply, eyes on John's shoulder.

"So you're saying I'm special?"

"I'm saying that this might be a big deal for me, too."

"Oh." John grinned. "So I am special." Of course he was. Rodney loved him. He knew it.

"What I'm saying is that even though you are really annoying, we've somehow developed an insanely impractical relationship defined by touching and sex and spending the night--," Rodney paused, grimacing, "yes, you might say being 'special' is a component, considering the level of intimacy."

"Huh?" Rodney was babbling nonsense, but John was pretty sure it was the sweetest thing he'd ever heard Rodney say and he couldn't stop grinning.

Rodney looked him in the eye. "Will you please just kiss me already?" he pleaded.

John shook his head. "No, I think you should keep telling me how wonderful I--mmmph--"

Okay, they could kiss instead.

Date: 2005-01-01 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-danvers514.livejournal.com
"You want to do it in the jumper, don't you?"

Was he that transparent? "Maybe," he hedged.


*lol*

Squee diddly dee! I loved this. Very sweet and hawt ;-)

Date: 2005-01-02 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
You just know he has wet puddlejumper dreams. *g*

Thank you!

Date: 2005-01-02 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miera-c.livejournal.com
"You want to do it in the jumper, don't you?"

LMFAO.
He *so* does.

I consider this an auspicious start for a new year. *nods*

Date: 2005-01-02 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! He's very naughty. But won't admit it.

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Date: 2005-01-02 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skater-g8r.livejournal.com
Oh! gosh!!!

::desperatly fans self::

this is way tooooo HOT!!!

::opens freezer door::

::turns on inustrial fans::

phwew!!!

Date: 2005-01-02 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Awww, you're too sweet. It's just some mushy smut, because they are so fun to play with.

I'm glad you liked it. *g*

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Date: 2005-01-02 12:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] reedfem.livejournal.com
Ooooh, nothing wrong with predictable.

"Smutty fun with Sheppard & McKay". Sounds like a book I'd like to have. Which for some obscure reason brought "Fun With Dick & Jane" into my mind.

My weirdness has no end.

I'd like to mention again how totally you rock. Sex, lube and warm fuzzies. What else does one need?

::curls up in Grrrl's lap::

Date: 2005-01-02 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
::pets:: Thank you dear! I thought it was a bit trite, but they're so much fun, especially when naked. And dirty. You know, I think "Smutty Fun..." would be a great name for a series. Hee!

And you rock even more. (One truffle left!! ::sobs::. ::glares at husband::)

Date: 2005-01-02 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] probodie.livejournal.com
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! This was HOT and FUN and GORGEOUS!

And hee you sooo need to do the fic with teh sexy thigh strap!!! And if John thinks its a wierd idea...then I must be wierd too!!!

I love that Rodney was excited about finding the lube and I love John's nervousness and the 'it wont fit up there' kinda anxiety!

Ohh hell, I just loved it all!

::fans self::

Date: 2005-01-02 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes, we all love that thigh strap. Mmmm.

Date: 2005-01-02 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenlev.livejournal.com
guh!

and this: "Please hold all my calls, thank you." bwahaha!

again, your humor just kills me too. very sweet and funny; and when i finally get to see sga after this long hiatus i'm going to be wondering why those two aren't sharing a room. can you see them explaining to elizabeth why they should be? *veg*

Date: 2005-01-02 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you! And of course they're sharing a room. And a bed. And a shower. They just haven't told anyone yet. *g*

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Date: 2005-01-02 12:33 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] nicci-mac.livejournal.com
WooHOO! You ARE gonna write the jumpersex fic yes?????

Date: 2005-01-02 12:34 am (UTC)
ext_16871: (SG - Cherish)
From: [identity profile] nicci-mac.livejournal.com
And the gunholstersex fic too

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Date: 2005-01-02 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Hee! Loved this. Rodney had John's number big time. I love that John had kinks he didn't want to think about too much and Rodney had kinks he could talk about all day long. (Thigh strap fic definitely needs to be written)

Loved it and loved the yummy hot friendly sex.

Date: 2005-01-02 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think Rodney really would go on and on about stuff like that all day long. He has no shame. *g* He'd also whisper it in John's ear at the most inopportune times.

Date: 2005-01-02 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merryish.livejournal.com
Aaaaaaaaaah this is amazingly wonderful. You have the voices dead on, and when you shift them into a slash context and keep the voices and stay so in character, you turn my heart into a tiny puddle of GOO. Mushy, sappy, completely melted GOO.

Make more! =)

Date: 2005-01-02 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh, that's so sweet, I made you gooey!! Thank you! Their voices are still a bit of a challenge, especially John's. I'm glad it worked for you.

I think that means I need to rewatch those eps...again. And again.

Date: 2005-01-02 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frahulettaes.livejournal.com
oh oh oh oh!!!!
Ohhhhhhhhh!!!
Damn it!!
That was so them!!!
heeeee!!!!

Date: 2005-01-02 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
::hugs::

I just love your feedback. ::giggles::

And your icons.

Date: 2005-01-02 03:01 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] nialla
Smut! Squee! Thunk! :)

[pondering jumpersex fic]

Date: 2005-01-02 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh yes, they so need to be doing it in the jumper. *g*

Glad you liked!

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Date: 2005-01-02 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karendreamer.livejournal.com
Oh, what a fantastic way to start the new year. I love John being all nervous and amazed and in love with Rodney. Gah, they just get hotter and hotter.

Again, thank you for the happy (off to buy more jelly beans for that castle).

Date: 2005-01-02 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this. They are so hot together. It's easy to write them that way, because they *are*.

Date: 2005-01-02 06:39 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] raqs.livejournal.com
aaaaahhhhhhh. bedtime story from thegrrrl. thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!

off to fall asleep wondering happily who was so clever as to have a whole case of lube in the Pegasus galaxy - the Ancients? or someone from Earth? What had they shipped it as? "Machine maintenance"? The ever generic "Supplies"? Or, my personal favorite, "Lube" (call things what they are!)

Date: 2005-01-02 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I'm figuring the stuff has medical applications, you know? As in "bend over and cough". It's all the same goo.

Yet it's disappearing off the shelves at an alarming rate.

Date: 2005-01-02 10:35 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alyse
Oh, how I loved this. This is a good day - I get Alan and Billy and good McShep. I must have been good :)

Love this bit:

Rodney looked him in the eye. "Will you please just kiss me already?" he pleaded.

John shook his head. "No, I think you should keep telling me how wonderful I--mmmph--"

Okay, they could kiss instead.


Hee! That little exchange is to them!

Date: 2005-01-03 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked that endling, LOL, I couldn't figure out how to end the damn thing. It was heading toward sap, and I had to do something!!

I'm so tickled it worked out okay.

Date: 2005-01-02 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
--pulled too far out--

I love imperfectsex!fic.

That was so fun and HOT. Whew. ::fans self::

Thank you!

Date: 2005-01-03 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
I figure there's bound to be some bumbling going on, you know?

I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Date: 2005-01-02 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coreopsis.livejournal.com
"What I'm saying is that even though you are really annoying, we've somehow developed an insanely impractical relationship defined by touching and sex and spending the night--," Rodney paused, grimacing, "yes, you might say being 'special' is a component, considering the level of intimacy."
That is delightfully SO RODNEY. I could just hear him saying that and picture the expression on his face. And I love your John voice too.

Yay for smut! And their kinks. Yay for them too. *g*

Date: 2005-01-03 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm tickled that you enjoyed this. Yup, kinks are always good. Very good. They're finding out all sorts of interesting things about each other. *g*

atlantis ficlet

Date: 2005-01-02 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cartador.livejournal.com
I recently discovered your work and loved it, specially your Atlantis stories. After reading this lovely ficlet, I'm still amazed how perfectly you capture not only their personalities, but also their speech pattern and cadenze. I can 'see' this happening - in another universe where this is allowed on TV - exactly as you describe it. Yum.

Re: atlantis ficlet

Date: 2005-01-03 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh wow, thank you, that is a huge compliment! I still struggle a bit with their voices, especially Sheppard's, so I really appreciate the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed.

And yeah, the show *should* have these kinds of episodes, shouldn't it? *g*

Date: 2005-01-02 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teand.livejournal.com
I have this fear that when I finally see SGA it won't be as witty or as wonderful or as hot as stories like this have convinced me it must be.

Even so, he was sure it was blindingly obvious what they were about to do, that it was written on their faces as they walked past other residents--oh yes, we're going to have sex now, we're going to Rodney's room so I can shove my cock up his ass, isn't that nice? Please hold all my calls, thank you.

Laughed so hard here I think I sprained something.

Date: 2005-01-03 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh, you are so kind, thank you very much! And yes, the show is just like this. Sex all the time. *g*

Ooh err missus!

Date: 2005-01-02 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-moonmoth.livejournal.com
Awwwww, lovely first time fic, Grrrl. Very nice indeed. Very, very, very nice...

::gets distracted by the pretty and starts reading again::

::drools::

will there be a follow up where the, uh, tables are turned, as twere?

Re: Ooh err missus!

Date: 2005-01-03 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you! LOL! I'm really glad you liked this.

It's possible that there might be a follow-up at some point, the concept is kind of hard to resist. *g*

Date: 2005-01-03 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange852.livejournal.com
I appeared online whining about a head cold, and this story was recommended to me by the incomparable [livejournal.com profile] nialla42 as "medicinal smut."

"For god's sake, John, just pretend it's your P90, okay? You've got better aim with that."

Yup, that worked. :D Enjoyable experience all around. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2005-01-03 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
"Medicinal smut", LOL, that was very kind of her indeed! Thank you, I'm so flattered that it was effective. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you are feeling better soon!

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Date: 2005-01-03 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gigitrek.livejournal.com
Nothing wrong with by-the-numbers smut!

Rodney loved him. He knew it.

Oh, of course he does. Very sweet.

Date: 2005-01-03 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Thank you, gigi! It was mushy, I know, but I just couldn't help myself. It's the whole, er, holiday spirit. Yeah, that's it.

Has nothing to do with me being a total sap.

Date: 2005-01-04 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
You posted this while I was away. and I just now found it when I went to your LJ to get a link to Reedfem's gallery.

And Holy Hannah.

That was hot and hot and sweet and hot. Did I mention the hot?

I love John being nervous and Rodney being Rodney. And the ending, with Rodney's babbling confession of affection and his pleading to be kissed so he won't have to talk about it anymore.

John lying in a slick of come. Now that's an image that's going to stay with me.

And you wrote Rodney on the bottom. Yay.

And before I start babbling I'm going to go read it again.

Date: 2005-01-04 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
chelle! Sweetie! Thank you, you're so nice. *g* I was just having some fun with them, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I figured it was time for a bottom!Rodney fic. Even if he is a little obnoxious about it.

I'm also glad Rodney's little confession there was effective. He's so in luuurrrve. *g*

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Date: 2005-01-08 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niennah.livejournal.com
Hi! I'm here by a random path of ... other people's recs, and from your website. I've been reading stuff there all evening, and now this fic. It's all so good! I'm so glad I found your stuff. Love this fic, so very hot. :)

Date: 2005-01-08 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Why, thank you! *g* You're very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed the fics! And I really appreciate your taking the time to let me know.

These guys are just impossible to resist--so hot, and so much fun. They belong together, don't they?

Thanks again!

Mmmm... happy mmmm....

Date: 2005-01-09 04:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] kylielee1000.livejournal.com
Ah, yes, I love first -time fuckfests, I admit it, and this is right up with the hottest of them, with the slipping out and the awkwardness and the "I made him come so I must have done it mostly right."

And them finding a truckload of lube? I'm sure Carson made sure of it, along with a mountain of condoms. You know--in case they made friends in the Pegasus Galaxy.

"You shouldn't be staring at my crotch all the time."

Mwa ha ha! Oh yes, you should.

Thanks for making my day, sweetie!

Re: Mmmm... happy mmmm....

Date: 2005-01-09 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oh hey! Kylie's venturing out onto the LJ thing! Woo!

Thank you, sweetie. It was smutty and silly, yes, I know. I can't resist those first time experience type stories. (obviously) I'm so the queen of fluff.

I should have you beta this, so I can put it up on my website. My lovely website. *g*

Date: 2005-01-14 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aw-lemongirl.livejournal.com
This was just a perfect fic! I loved it and this: You want to do it in the jumper, don't you?"

Was he that transparent? "Maybe," he hedged.
, had me giggling like a school girl.

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