Birthday Girl!

[thegrrrl2002]

It's destina's birthday! Happy birthday, you sweet thing, you! I hope your birthday is lovely and filled with marvelous things. In honor of this prestigious day, I offer up a snippet, not really porny, wherein I beat a simple idea into the ground. It's called "The Meaning of Life"

"Well, what's it say?" Jack asked, waving his hand at the white marble slab. ""Meaning of life stuff", or what?" He personally was rooting for "here lie big stinkin' guns that will shoot down a Goa'uld mothership".

Daniel touched his fingertips to the slab. His brows came together, his forehead wrinkling. "Definitely 'meaning of life stuff'".

Jack stood closer, drawn by Daniel's thoughtful tone, by the way his fingers lingered over the carvings. "Really?"

"Absolutely," Daniel said, nodding. "See, this part right here? It says that I should bend you over this table and--"

"Very funny, Daniel." Jack didn't find it very funny at all. Not after five exceedingly uneventful days of exploring the temple ruins. Five days of watching Daniel, with no distractions whatsoever.

"No really, this part right here," Daniel pointed to one set of marks, "describes how beautiful your ass is, and how it really needs--"

"That's enough," Jack said sharply. He really didn't need to spend the rest of the day with his dick standing up and begging.

Daniel edged closer to him, his hip bumping against Jack's hip, standing close enough to breathe on Jack's neck. "You are very cranky when you're not getting laid, you know that?"

Daniel's voice was reminiscent of the nights they laid together, completed and breathless, sharing a pillow with faces nearly touching. Nights when Daniel would explain to him exactly what he planned on doing next. Explain in such explicit detail that even though exhausted, Jack would find himself reaching for Daniel, again and again, until yet another night was past.

"It took you how many years to figure that out?" Without turning his head, Jack let his arm dangle at his side, then slowly moved it to cup Daniel's groin. Yup, there it was, Daniel's cock, hard and inviting. Jack squeezed and was gratified to hear a soft hiss.

"Too many," Daniel answered, placing his hand over Jack's.

"Yeah, well, we both, you know. Slow. Gun-shy." Jack slid his hand away, staring all the while at the marble slab. Because if he so much as glanced at Daniel, he'd end up doing something completely inappropriate, like hugging or kissing him. Or licking the sweat from his belly. "So, really, we're talking meaning of life here?" he asked, tapping the slab.

"I was," Daniel said quietly.

And Jack had to kiss him after all, right there in the middle of the ruins of whatever the hell the planet was called.

Comments

[slb44.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, very nice indeed. *g*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[reedfem.livejournal.com]

Awwwww.... dang, I wish it was MY birthday.

Very sweet. With a nice hot spicy center.

And I love the icon. Scruffy Daniel, mmmm good.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, darling! Such sweet feedback for a groggy Monday morning (where did that weekend go?)

So, when is your birthday? For you, I'm sure I could come up with something naughty. Especially after gazing at your very inspiring website. Have I told you that gallery rocks? Because it does. Gorgeous pics.

[reedfem.livejournal.com]

Not til October. Plenty of time...

I have been totally ignoring my website, due to my complete lack of ability to revamp it so far. I need to update, I can smell the stink from here. I'll add it to my list.

But thanks. Inspiration is good. Especially if it results in some tasty fanfic. Grrrl fic, yum!

[destina.livejournal.com]

"So, really, we're talking meaning of life here?" he asked, tapping the slab.

"I was," Daniel said quietly.

Guh. :D This is such a beautiful birthday present. There just isn't anything better than Jack and Daniel being on the same page. Or the same slab. *g* They will always reach for each other, yes? 'Cause you know, that's the way it's meant to be. Thank you so much for this, and for the birthday wishes!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Des! You're so kind. I'm flattered that you enjoyed it. Hope you had a happy one. You deserve it.

[brightbeak.livejournal.com]

this seems like a nice vignette that could obviously be worked into something larger....

please? ;)

bb

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

*g* It was worked up from a scene in a larger fic I gave up on a while back. I still might try and overhaul it. Actually, messing around with this scene gave me a new idea for it. So, you never know.

[brightbeak.livejournal.com]

yeah, i've got an abandonned ficlette or few, and i was thinking about one of them, and somehow it works better in a more recent fandom that i'm into than it did in the fandom it was originally scripted for. (as in, the main idea blend was for VOY, and it's gonna work a LOT better in SG-1)

glad that tweaking it might have awoken a formerly-comatose bunny! :)

bb

[raqs.livejournal.com]

that's an excellently sweet birthday present.
happy birthday to destina - she deserves it!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dith! I tried to back away from the sappy, but you know, it just happens sometimes. *g*

[http://users.livejournal.com/oceana_/]

Or licking the sweat from his belly.

*makes happy little pleasure sounds*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Glad I can make you make happy noises. And, uh, your icon is making me happy. Very happy. In a quiet way, because I'm in the office. *g*

[nicci-mac.livejournal.com]

So much in so few words. You are a genius. And the icon goes so well with the teasing Daniel in this little fic. ::goes to happy place whe Daniel really does bend Jack over the white marble::

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Aww, stop it now, you're making me blush. I'm glad you liked the little snippet.

::joins you in the happy place::

[nicci-mac.livejournal.com]

Whoa! I got your reply six times in my in-box. For a second there I thought you had fallen hopelessly in love with me and were sending me spam love peoms. ROFL

Or that lj had screwed the hell up again.

[nicci-mac.livejournal.com]

Whoa! I got your reply six times in my in-box. For a second there I thought you had fallen hopelessly in love with me and were sending me spam love peoms. ROFL

Or that lj had screwed the hell up again.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

LOL! Sorry about. LJ is totally screwy. I kept getting error messages, and then suddenly the comment was posted and posted and posted and posted...I don't know if you'll get this, or if you do, if you'll get it six thousand times.

And I have fallen hopelessly in love with you, don't you know that? ::hugs::

[nicci-mac.livejournal.com]

YAY - got this one three times!

LJ has been overrun by the Goa'uld!

RUN--SAVE YOUrseeelf! ::hugs you back::

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Nope, I'm waiting patiently for Jack to rescue me.

::taps foot::

Jack? Where the hell are you? Oh, I bet I know what you're up to. No mind, I'll just wait here for that cutie Bray'tac to come get me.

[nicci-mac.livejournal.com]

Don't hold your breath -- Bray'tac, Hammond and Jaccobe Carter are engaging in some energetic three-way wrinkly sex right now and cannot come to the phone!

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

LOL! Sorry about. LJ is totally screwy. I kept getting error messages, and then suddenly the comment was posted and posted and posted and posted...I don't know if you'll get this, or if you do, if you'll get it six thousand times.

And I have fallen hopelessly in love with you, don't you know that? ::hugs::

[ningyouhime.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! =D

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

I adore that icon.

[ningyouhime.livejournal.com]

Thank you! =D nevskaya made it for me.

[skater-g8r.livejournal.com]

beautiful 8-)))

i hope you take this further too 8-)
That marble sounds soooo inviting, how could they resist *bg*

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie! Not sure how comfy the marble would be, although I'm sure Jack would be plenty distracted. *g*

[skater-g8r.livejournal.com]

But its so hot!!
and what a better way to cool down than on a nice icy slab of marble *bfg*

sorry!!! ...going now... *blushes*

[ev-vy.livejournal.com]

Very sweet! Made me smile mushily.

Just the tiniest of nitpicks, they probably lay together at nights.

Re: Oops

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you for spotting that. I should have warned folks that this was unbeta'd. Lay. Yes, that sounds much better.

Glad I could make smile mushily. *g*

[beefree88.livejournal.com]

lol
Interesting look into Jack's mind. Fondling Daniel on missions is ok, but hugging is inapropriate? ;)

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Well, it was surreptious fondling.

That's my story and I'm sticking to it. *g*

[gigitrek.livejournal.com]

What? How did I miss that? Now I'm extra glad I got the computer back.

So simple, yet so nice. Lovely.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It was just a little thing, but I'm glad that you liked it. And I'm glad you got your computer back, too.