A typo, obviously...

[thegrrrl2002]

In my previous whine post, I accidently said I wanted people to write snippets to amuse me. Clearly, I meant to say I wrote a snippet to amuse myself. A Sheppard/McKay snippet, actually.


"Define 'inexperienced'".

"Well," John said, "as in 'not having much experience in a particular area of--of expertise'.

"Exactly how much is 'not much'?"

"Could we not discuss this right now?" John didn't want to talk about it; he didn't want to talk about anything right now. Trying to make his point, he pulled his shirt off and pushed Rodney down on the bed.

"Hold it, hold it," Rodney said, with his characteristic let-me-get-this-straight tone, even as he rubbed his hands across John's chest. "By 'not much', do you mean 'I once ogled a guy's ass in the showers' or 'I haven't made it through all the positions in the Gay Kama Sutra yet'?"

John blinked. "There's a Gay Kama Sutra?"

"Asked and answered, thank you." Rodney lay back, pulling John down over his body. "Have you *ever* had sex with a man before?"

"You mean other than myself?"

For a long moment Rodney stared up at him. He began to smile. "So in other words," Rodney said slowly, "I'm your first. Because you're so crazy about me that you--"

"Hey, hey--let's not get carried away here. I just--"

"You find me irresistible," Rodney told him, grinning broadly.

"Now did I say that?"

"You didn't have to. I inferred it. You've sucumbed to the infamous McKay charm."

"Infamous, huh?" It was, at least, an appropriate description. He relented. "Maybe a little."

Admitting it wasn't so bad after all. Because even though it made Rodney ridiculously pleased with himself, he was even more pleased with John. Which in ended, resulted in John feeling very pleased indeed.

Comments

[raqs.livejournal.com]

whee! thegrrrl brings her trademark happy sweetness to atlantis. oh god, do they need it.

I want MORE of THIS.

[fanaddict.livejournal.com]

Clearly, I meant to say I wrote a snippet to amuse myself.

I'm all for more typos of this variety. :)

I like how McKay's "define inexperience" hearkens hack to the Underground ep where Sheppard asked him to define "strange" - it's details like that are very "on" and show-specific.

Also, cool that Sheppard is the inexperienced one here - so far the trend has been that he would try to make it with an inanimate object if he were horny enough. I'm not sure I buy that/see where that idea is coming from, so it's nice to see it a difference way.

And heh to the infamous charm line - very amusing!

I'd love to see how they got to this point though.... [whistles innocently into the wind]

By the way, there was a Sheppard/McKay snippet posted to the pegasusgate LJ yesterday, in case you hadn't seen it yet... I thought it was...fun.

[kelly-girl.livejournal.com]

Wheee!!! Lovely little snippet and love how smug and cute McKay acts and I like the talk and Sheppard being 'inexperienced.'

[mmmchelle.livejournal.com]

This was fun.

I like confident McKay. It's a nice change from the neurotic, insecure McKay that is quickly becoming fanon.

And of course John succumbed. Who wouldn't? /g/

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

I do think they need to be having more fun there.

Actually, I had been thinking about your dialog post. Which made me think about writing dialog. Sheppard and McKay have done that "define" thing a couple of times, and it always amuses me. (What, you don't know what "strange" means?)

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I'm not sure I like where fanon McKay is heading. Not that he hasn't shown signs of being neurotic and maybe tad insecure, but there's more to him than that.

And yes, we've all succumbed to Rodney's charm. He *is* irresistible.

[wickdzoot.livejournal.com]

You are entirely correct. I'm seeing, gack, insecure, whiny adolescent girl Rodney and it's squicking me badly.

[ane.livejournal.com]

*note to self*

Don't read the grrrl's snippets while at work 'cause you may have to explain the grin and snickering.

I loved the use of the 'define ___' thing that McKay and Sheppard have going. The 'define theory' conversation was one of my favorite parts of The Storm

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

I love the "define" business they do with each other. "Strange" was the best one so far, LOL. "You don't know what strange means?" Or something like that.

Theirloveissoundefined.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I think I like the idea of Sheppard being more inexperienced. However he may definite it. *g*

[kres.livejournal.com]

Heeeeeee. That was lovely. And so in character :)=

Defined

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

I loved how puzzled McKay looked when Sheppard said that, too. They are so cute together.

Glad I could make you snicker.

Oh, and....

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Are you talking about gigitrek's ficlet on Pegasus_gate? I had read it in her LJ, and loved it. Furry Sheppard, just like a cat. Hee. I love everything she writes, and I'm so tickled that she's writing Atlantis fic now.

[medie]

Bweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! Just what I needed on a stormy monday!!!!!!!!!!! Woot!

Love those two! *G*

[burnt-smore.livejournal.com]

I have to say I don't really see the McKay/Sheppard slash on screen, but I can totally believe it when you write it.

*converted*

[raqs.livejournal.com]

*snerk.*

yes, it sounded like them - and that's hard to do since we haven't had so much of them. i want more.

[agentotter.livejournal.com]

Bwah! I wonder if Rodney ever shuts up, even during sex. ;D

[sffan.livejournal.com]

Hee. It's adorable!

[kelly-girl.livejournal.com]

I like it too. Rodney seems to like it and I also like that though Shep was "inexperienced" that didn't mean he was innocent and shy or however they used to make certain people in certain romance books. That used to drive me crazy. He seemed eager to gain some experience too.

*Hmmm, Rodney teaching John certain sexual things...whoa

[gurrier.livejournal.com]

I liked the "inexperienced != innocent & shy" thing too. And that McKay wasn't put off by that, but gloated instead. Such a Rodney thing to do!

[gurrier.livejournal.com]

Sweet snark! They're such a perfect couple.

Great icon too!

[jenlev.livejournal.com]

what a great jousting dialog!

go ahead and keep writing snippets please *is very amused*

*veg*

[gigitrek.livejournal.com]

Have you *ever* had sex with a man before?"

"You mean other than myself?"



That seems like such an obvious reaction. Why haven't I heard it before?

Great snippet. I like the experienced Rodney idea, too. Who knows, maybe Sheppard's act is just that, and he really is inexperienced. Wouldn't be the first time.

[thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com]

Hmmm, Rodney teaching John certain sexual things

Are you reading my mind now? Because that thought definitely makes me go wibbly. *g* Especially if Rodney is teaching and snarking and trying not to lose control completely.

Huh.

[kelly-girl.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, I can so see that scene and when Rodney does lose control or is close to it, Sheppard will then give him a smug "HA!" smile. Followed by someone licking the other's body.